Clouds -- a Weekend Mini Challenge Poem
Be aware clouds influence
White and fluffy sunshine filled
Calming effect makes us smile
Dark clouds roll over our heads
Dark clouds roll over our heads
Lightening strikes down seers our earth
Threatening eminence brings gloom
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- Photo and Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2019, All Rights Reserved
- I'm linked with Magaly Guerrero in the Imaginary Garden at http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2019/07/weekend-mini-challenge-pick-2-prompts.html?m=1
- Magaly has introduced a short poem form which I am trying here:
"Cherita: “the Malay word for story or tale… consists of a single stanza of a one-line verse, followed by a two-line verse, and then finishing with a three-line verse.” ~ CHERITA [1--2--3]"
- Magaly also wants to merge two prompts. I used Clouds, a Natural Phenomen from Kerry Says - Let's Include Pathetic Fallacy, May 21, 2014 and then Influence (verb-have an influence on), Under an Influence; Anxiety Lost In Translation; Blocking Writer's Block- Weekend Mini!, March 19, 2016, linked to a source for these words, visible by clicking on the URL words in Italics above.
- Magaly's example:
Labels: Flash Writing, Poem, Real Toads, South American 2016 Holiday, Week-Mini-Challenge
posted by Jim @ 7/21/2019 01:55:00 AM
7 comments
7 Comments:
Now I have this image of clouds plotting fluff and lightning. I wonder which of the two clouds enjoy best...
I long for those dark clouds! We could use a little rain here. Exquisite write, Jim 💜💜💜
Eminence! For sure, excellent description
very moody - like it. We had just arrived at a mountain lake when dark storm clouds skimmed the rim and surprised us! Supposedly 50 miles an hour winds and huge hail. But it just by-passed us, but the lightening made it a very short day at the beach. Sigh
Those clouds seem rather intelligent (not as innocent as they seem!)
I have a soft spot for clouds, Jim, they’re so expressive. I enjoy a good storm too.
Oh clouds, you are so deceptive at times with your fluffy white flirting. Love this! Great write!
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