Trinket -- an Acrostic Poem
Trinket
Trinket of mine you are
Right from the very start
I knew you'd be for me
No one finer I'd see
Keeping score these ten years
Every day calmed my fears
Trinket to me you are
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- Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2019, All Rights Reserved
- I'm linked with Marian in the Imaginary Garden at http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2019/07/just-one-word-trinket.html?m=1
- Update Noon, July 14. YOU were correct if you sensed trouble with the last two lines. That part is NOT us, Mrs. Jim and I have been married 46 years since last February. 47th honeymoon this Fall?
Labels: Acrostic, Love Poem, Personal-Challenge-2019, Poem, Real Toads, Rhyme
posted by Jim @ 7/13/2019 08:30:00 PM
9 comments
9 Comments:
Ah, sweet! And I'm sure you are equally treasured.
Some trinkets aren't treasures - others are treasures we don't let go of! Obviously she's your treasure :)
A sweet acrostic and proof that trinkets can be kept for ever.
Let's hope she has a trinket of you too. Now where is her poem of you?!
One can't imagine! A loved one can often appear to be taken for granted that one just seems to be unfair to her presence. It is often a fault of familiarity that clouds the mind.
Hank
Awwww... but that last line gives me a little pause. I'm thinking a bit like Hank, maybe this familiarity is causing the bloom to fade from the rose? I hope not.
Good job Jim@
I was reading AWWWW so sweet, until your last line threw me. Maybe your trinket turned to gold. :)
Thanks, guys. I changed my last word from were to are. It now fits the poem's tense. I really did mean 'were' but to make it right with Gramar I would have to have a transition line or two.
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