Saturday, June 01, 2019

A Saturday Flash Poem


Eli Edward Evangelidis (2018)
Used with Permission

Into the Garden

Descendant of Eve
Inhabits the Garden

But only at night
In she sneaks picks the lock

God's lock sealing tight
Until this lass did match

With God's wild friends play
Play till Morning rouses

God's perfect Garden
His rule breached one more time
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 - Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2019, All Rights Reserved
 - Picture is of an engraving titled 'Beauty Forgotten in Survival's Eyes'  by a contemporary artist, Eli Edward Evangelidis of Australia.  Permission has been given to those who write to post with our work.  You can see this and others of Eli by using the following link: https://www.instagram.com/eliedwardart/
 - I'm linked with Kerry O'Connor in the Imaginary Garden at  http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2019/06/art-flash-55.html?m=1
 - Kerry's suggestion was to write as inspired by the engraving.  We could also write a Flash (short) poem of 55 wordsMy poem purposely has 55 syllables not counting the title [also has 43 words without the title].

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10 Comments:

At Saturday, June 01, 2019 5:31:00 PM, Blogger Brendan said...

So this is how Eve lets her hair down. Who knew the honkeytonk was just outside Eden!

 
At Saturday, June 01, 2019 7:59:00 PM, Blogger Sanaa Rizvi said...

I like the reference to Eve in this one, Jim.

 
At Saturday, June 01, 2019 8:45:00 PM, Blogger The Real Cie said...

You've gotta be slick to get away with it!
I always thought Eve got a bad rap.

 
At Saturday, June 01, 2019 11:17:00 PM, Blogger Magaly Guerrero said...

I always knew Eve had skills. :-D

 
At Sunday, June 02, 2019 12:59:00 AM, Blogger Margaret said...

I take this as someone other than Eve as you write "descendant" but either way... to break into the Garden of Eden... I don't know, my Catholic self is a bit horrified :)

 
At Sunday, June 02, 2019 2:26:00 AM, Blogger Kerry O'Connor said...

Eve never did play by the rules.

 
At Sunday, June 02, 2019 3:23:00 AM, Blogger Kim M. Russell said...

Eve never was just a pretty face, Jim, and rules are made to be broken!

 
At Sunday, June 02, 2019 9:53:00 AM, Blogger Rommy said...

I hummed Girls Just Wanna Have Fun while reading this. Eve wants to be the one who walks in the sun and moonlight.

 
At Sunday, June 02, 2019 2:08:00 PM, Blogger brudberg said...

I'm sure it was a great choice in the end... this is how life is born.

 
At Tuesday, June 04, 2019 2:59:00 PM, Blogger Susie Clevenger said...

Oh, Eve..I am so glad you wrote her having fun.

 

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