A Poem for the Weekend Mini-challenge
Breakfast
I love my wife dearly
She doesn't cook me breakfast
My wife doesn't cook
I dearly love my breakfast
My breakfast loves me dearly
I doesn't cook my wife
My cook loves my wife
Me breakfast I dearly doesn't
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- Photo and Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2019, All Rights Reserved
- I'm linked with Kim Russell in the Imaginary Garden at http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2019/11/weekend-mini-challenge-uncertainty-of.html?m=1
- Kim wishes as a Mini-challenge to write patterned on a poem written by a guest lecturer, Wendy Poe, in her class on the uncertainty of a poet. Read it here, http://frombooksofpoems.blogspot.com/2007/03/uncertainty-of-poet-by-wendy-cope.html?m=1 . You will see that I could have shown more mix ups but my story has been told with the four couplets. Plus I'm writing using my smartphone as my laptop has cratered.
- Then too I'm readying for my sabbatical and hadn't planned posting for a few weeks.
Labels: Humor(?), Real Toads, Week-Mini-Challenge
14 Comments:
Hey Jim! Your poem made me smile! Breakfast is the most important meal and sets us up for the day. Four couplets are plenty for a breakfast poem, Jim, and I understand the challenges of writing on your smartphone – I have similar problems with my Kindle. Have a restful sabbatical!
Kim, this one made me laugh aloud. The last couplet in particular. Better keep an eye on that cook. LOL!
I love love love this! Especially the last three lines. :)
Skip the sabbatical. Keep writing, please. <3
Haha, watch out for that cook! Don't cook your wife. The cook knows!
Hahahahha this is absolutely delightful, Jim! ❤️
"My wife doesnt cook. I dearly love my breakfast." I love it! Made me grin.
This circular style seems to suit you Jim
The second stanza is great! Haha!
This was so good Jim as it ended in such confusion!
This was great fun! And you ensure that we infer so much in the unsaid – masterly!
So, you are serving your wife breakfast in bed I hope .....
OH this was so much fun... good thing that you didn't cook your wife even if she left with the cook.
Love this! Watch out for that cook ...lol!
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