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When you come
When you're here I want not
for you to feel welcome
But I won't make you leave
After my old roan died
her stall over in the
red barn has been empty
red barn has been empty
to where you have come from
and I won't care a bit
Seems my clean stable here
has been missing a mare
I think for way to long
Well, you might grow on me
- Photos taken (2014, link) at the Vauxhall City Farm, Vauxhall, London U.K. (More pictures here).- Photos and Poem Copyright , Jimmiehov 2014 and 2019, All Rights Reserved
- I am linked with Sanaa Rizvi at Poets United in the Poetry Pantry, http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/2019/11/pantry-of-poetry-and-prose-3.html? m=1
- Go there to find a similar titled poem by Maya Angelou link which helped inspire me to write this.
- ** Neck rein, a horse will turn right or left at the rider's nudge on her neck, left or right, to the opposite of the nudge. The reins are not necessary at all.
- ** Neck rein, a horse will turn right or left at the rider's nudge on her neck, left or right, to the opposite of the nudge. The reins are not necessary at all.
Labels: Fiction, Poem, Poetry Pantry, Poets United, prose poem, Syllabic Form
6 Comments:
This sounds like a warm welcome... but in the end the mare should make her own decisions.
An inspired piece, Jim! Beautifully rendered ❤️
Oh an empty stall is a sad thing indeed.
Those alpacas in the lower photo are quite good at spitting, so keep your distance.
Sounds like this protagonist has settled into comfortable aloneness! I like the mixed messages; they should work to prevent further intrusion LOL.
This is so beautiful. I can feel the strong love and affection for the beloved roan mare; and then the reluctant opening to the possibility of loving another. I also love how I didn't really get what was coming until that last stanza revealed the information that connected all the other stanzas. Really a wonderful read.
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