Flash Writing ~~ a short poem using 55 words
*Notes:
- Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2019, All Rights Reserved
- Photo previously used on this blog and was linked to Real Toads, Sunday Feature featuring Lisa Graham in 2014 and reposted on my other blog in 2016, click here
- I am linked with Kim Russell in the Imaginary Garden at http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2019/03/weekend-mini-challenge-nomenclature.html
- Kim wants us to give a name to some one or some thing using poetry
- This is a "Flash Writing Poem" having exactly 55 words not counting the title, and with every two lines containing ten syllables, most lines have five.
- 1 Kings 1 The Message (MSG) [ https://www.biblegateway.com/passage/?search=1+Kings+1&version=MSG]
"David
1 1-4 King David grew old. The years had caught up with him. Even though they piled blankets on him, he couldn’t keep warm. So his servants said to him, “We’re going to get a young virgin for our master the king to be at his side and look after him; she’ll get in bed with you and arouse our master the king.” So they searched the country of Israel for the most ravishing girl they could find; they found Abishag the Shunammite and brought her to the king. The girl was stunningly beautiful; she stayed at his side and looked after the king, but the king did not have sex with her.
Labels: Bible, Flash Writing, Humor(?), Real Toads, Syllabic Form, Week-Mini-Challenge
7 Comments:
...the Bible really could compete with modern day soap operas I think... and outdo them, indeed!
I agree with Margaret
(Or in other words, "The things that you're liable to read in your Bible, they ain't necessarily so!")
What Margaret said :)
Some things in the bible really stun me...
How scandalous! But this is why I love Bible stories...everything's in there! A beautiful write.
Yes, Bible stories have many soap opera plots in them.
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