... It left yesterday ~~ a small Poem for "November Themes"
My guest?Pitter-pat
Rain, rain go away
Come again
Please don't stay
Love for you has gone its way
It left yesterday
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Photo and Poem Copyright, © 2017 Jimmiehov, All Rights Reserved (my photo is a 'PrintScreen' of a cherub from Google search, link where this and more are to be found.)
- I'm linked with Marian, at the Imaginary Garden with Real Toads, Words Count, http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2017/11/november-themes.html
- Marian wrote of her fund raising effort (read more from the link above AND the one in this paragraph) using 30 theme words to write a new poem each day of this month. Her charity is the Center for New Americans, a nonprofit organization where she lives in western Massachusetts. Her family is helping with this effort as well. Besides writing their poem, the fund raisers are making one artistic drawing (and/or paintings??) a day to match the poem and that day's theme.
My little poem form is called a shadorma which is not necessarily rhyming but is required to fit the six line syllable lengths of '3/5/3/3/7/5' each. (Writer's Digest link) It would fit her word list with using here the words "Rain" and/or "Love/Friendship".
Labels: Cherubs, Love Poem, Poem, Real Toads, Syllabic Form
posted by Jim @ 11/26/2017 03:27:00 PM
5 comments
5 Comments:
Love your last two lines!
Yes, good one, Jim. It left yesterday, so we can really enjoy the rain today. :)
Love that closing :)
Rain should come in small doses...
Your poem reminds me of most people's reactions to the weather--it's too hot, it's too cold, it's too wet, it hasn't rain enough...
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