Sunday, November 26, 2017

... It left yesterday ~~ a small Poem for "November Themes"


My guest?

Pitter-pat
Rain, rain go away
Come again
Please don't stay
Love for you has gone its way
It left yesterday


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Photo and Poem Copyright, © 2017 Jimmiehov, All Rights Reserved (my photo is a 'PrintScreen' of a cherub from Google search, link where this and more are to be found.)

 - I'm linked with Marian, at the Imaginary Garden with Real Toads, Words Count,  http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2017/11/november-themes.html


 - Marian wrote of her fund raising effort (read more from the link above AND the one in this paragraph) using 30 theme words to write a new poem each day of this month.   Her charity is the Center for New Americans, a nonprofit organization where she lives in western Massachusetts.  Her family is helping with this effort as well.  Besides writing their poem, the fund raisers are making one artistic drawing (and/or paintings??) a day to match the poem and that day's theme. 

My little poem form is called a shadorma which is not necessarily rhyming but is required to fit the six line syllable lengths of  '3/5/3/3/7/5' each. (Writer's Digest linkIt would fit  her word list with using here the words "Rain" and/or "Love/Friendship". 

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5 Comments:

At Sunday, November 26, 2017 7:51:00 PM, Blogger Sara McNulty said...

Love your last two lines!

 
At Monday, November 27, 2017 4:58:00 AM, Blogger Marian said...

Yes, good one, Jim. It left yesterday, so we can really enjoy the rain today. :)

 
At Monday, November 27, 2017 9:06:00 AM, Blogger Sanaa Rizvi said...

Love that closing :)

 
At Monday, November 27, 2017 3:02:00 PM, Blogger brudberg said...

Rain should come in small doses...

 
At Monday, November 27, 2017 9:32:00 PM, Blogger Magaly Guerrero said...

Your poem reminds me of most people's reactions to the weather--it's too hot, it's too cold, it's too wet, it hasn't rain enough...

 

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