NaPoWriMo 2017, Day 10 -- A poem from my sketch/a portrait poem
Brother Ray
I knew Brother Ray from way back when 
1976 we met at church 
His church since he had retired was Baptist 
the sermon the pastor had asked him to 
give the closing prayer.  I remember that  
then, not a word he uttered. Some may have
I am sure that his God did understand 
and Brother Ray trembled with every move 
While he spoke his voice was trembling as well 
church member had been visited by him 
He didn't drive so someone else took him 
and moved away.  There wasn't another 
who stepped up to drive so I volunteered
 
We visited together for fourteen years 
After time I realized that I could 
understand every word he'd say.  Wonders 
Two more years, at age 99 he died
(My favorite tale was of his hunting skill 
Every year he'd kill his deer though he shook
We were quite a pair, every Monday night)
_ _ _ _ _We were quite a pair, every Monday night)
Photos and Poem Copyright © 2017 Jimmiehov, All Rights Reserved
- I'm linked with Margaret at the Imaginary Garden with Real Toads, Poem Sketching, http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2017/04/poem-sketching.html
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- to Day Ten of NaPoWriMo, http://www.napowrimo.net/day-ten-5/
- Margaret's instructions were, "Today's challenge is for you to create and use a word list (and from it write).
- Over at NaPoWriMo the instructions were, "Today, I’d like to challenge you to write a poem that is a portrait of someone important to you."
- I tried to satisfy both.
Labels: Jim's Life, NaPoWriMo 2017, People, Real Toads, Syllabic Form

3 Comments:
I love this story ... especially how you came to understand him over time, just by spending more time with him. I'm sure he is with you still, his spirit and his words.
What a wonderful story and friendship.
Wonderful! This is obviously a cherished memory and 14 years! Wow.
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