NaPoWriMo 2017-03 -- an April's Ways Poem
April;
Wintered Survivors' Sounds and Thoughts
I was thinking about the frostbite
Our plants suffered this January Sitting on the deck, getting some sun
Thoughts drifting, sun also damages
Near baby talk, think three-year-old child
Now and then muffled sobs emitting
Oh dear, oh dear, what has Mother done
So pretty, she stood erect all day
And Purple Violet lost her limbs
Aunt Oleander we thought she'd gone
Opening my left eye I noticed
Plants and flowers, their lips seemed to move Pointing here, there, Lady's been replaced
Violet too, Vincas now, pink and white
Old Lovely Lady,
got frozen to the ground
Oleanders edges by the fence
Amputated sprouts, growing some new
Opening other eye, all was calm
The plants now still, their message given _ _ _ _ _
Photo and Poem Copyright © 2017 Jimmiehov, All Rights Reserved
- I'm linked with Kerry O'Conner at the Imaginary Garden with Real Toads, Speaking for Spring’s Stillborn Sprouts, http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2017/04/speaking-for-springs-stillborn-sprouts.html
- - -and
- I'm also linked to Day Three of NaPoWriMo, http://www.napowrimo.net/day-three-3/#comment-33727
Kerry's Challenge, "I invite you to write a new poem from the point of view of a grieving plant whose sprouts were just killed as a result of climate change."
New Vinca patch
Labels: NaPoWriMo 2017, Personal-Challenge-2017, Poem, Syllabic Form
6 Comments:
Wonderful personification of the plants, Jim. Their situation is so grim, and it feels even more devastated when their dialogue makes them sound so human.
I believe they do talk to each other.......I really love your closing line. Nature has messages for us, if we observe and listen.
I love all the everyday, domestic detail in this.
It sounds like some them survived at least... love the concerned voices from the plants.
Awful when that happens. Effectively detailed! k.
I hate it when the garden is robbed of its glory.
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