I Love without Even Thinking ~~ a 'Poem' for Tuesday Platform
(From Charles M. Schulz Museum Archives, originally published June 7, 1958.) She Softly Whispered; (Or was it Love) I love you, Jimmy, she softly whispered I love you too, My Darling and Sweetest That was last night, it was lovely for both Today, what is the scene, what do we hear I think I've found true love, I'll make him mine The girls gathered 'round, waiting to hear more Was there a knight in shining armor, or Did she end up, another one night stand I've found the neatest chick, loves me madly Guys come quickly, our Romeo tells all She's a nice girl, I whispered her "the words" Did he triumph, another one night stand _ _ _ _ _ Poem and Photo Copyright © 2016 and 2011 Jimmiehov, All Rights Reserved Comic Picture tribute Charles Schultz Museum Archives copied from The Imaginary Garden with Real Toads http://withrealtoads.blogspot.co.uk/2016/06/the-tuesday-platform_28.html Today I am linked with Marian's post at the link above It is open Tuesday, The Tuesday Platform where we write as we feel and link it to her post Another of my 'Poem' of a similar bend you may have read: http://jimmiehov6.blogspot.com/2014/10/a-sunday-mini-challenge.html |
Labels: Love Poem, Syllabic Form, Tuesday Platform
7 Comments:
Wise and cutting, and entertaining read. Thanks,dt
That's a lot of space you left for us to ponder an ending. I always want "happily ever after"
two chairs
much love...
My heart and mind are mixed on this one -- I am part girl who always writes in the fairy-tale end, and part woman who wishes for truth (and a real love, not fantasy) from a man. Thanks for sharing.
I think the beginning is always the harder... though it can be a happy ever after as well... the conclusion is left hanging.
An oft-repeated story.
Uh oh, someone's up to tricks. :)
Soft whispers can go a long way! But the beginnings can be a little trying! Just giving time is the solution!
Hank
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