Get listed ~~ Six Word Sadurday -- a Poem for Both
My six words:
"A work in progress -- or finished?"
Primed and ready. Daddy didn't know
Ladder's down there, under the window
Waiting for the moon to show some light
To 'lope, their plan.
Pent up was her love, soon to be aired
Been through the hoops, papers in order
TBF?
[click on the picture to see the ladder better]
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Photo and Poem Copyright © 2016 Jimmiehov, All Rights Reserved
- Today I'm linked with Grapling at the Imaginary Garden with Real Toads, Get Listed: May Edition, featuring George Carlin
The word list for our prompt: 'bleeped', 'bleeped' gravel, rave, lisp, rasp, heel, wile, pent, rant, lope, hoop (also bleeped, George Carlin video)
- I'm also listed with Cate at Six Word Saturday
Labels: Humor(?), Personal-Challenge-2016, Poem, Real Toads, Six Word Saturday
8 Comments:
Aww. I hope they make it. :)
This reminds me of my kids, who like to use the ladder to climb on the roof. Only, the other day, they did it in the rain and one of them knocked the ladder over intentionally, trapping her big sis on the roof. :P
I love the idea of "loping a plan." (I know it's short of elope, but I also have some horse background, and a slow smooth-running plan sounds good to me, too.) ;)
I love the image of the ladder, waiting for the moon.
Yes, I am with Kerry. I love the image of a ladder waiting for the moon A whole romantic story in that image alone.
cute! My parents eloped as neither Mother like their childs choice. Married for 47 years before my mom passed away.
Love a great elope... gotta love a happy Juliet.
Every relationship is a work in progress until it's over, isn't it?
cool ellipse on that (e)lope, Jim. thanks for adding your voice ~
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