NaPoWriMo 2016, Day # 25 ~~ Where Do I Come From?
From Where did I Come?
I came from sperm-rich egg hatched in the sea
It was the day of Molly and just me
You say, well now how on earth can that be
It wasn't, Silly, I was from the sea
A sea urchin not at his very best
Now grounded amidst pillars man behest
Brick and boards, mortar and nails, all the rest
I do hope that you'll keep this to your chest
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Photo and Poem Copyright © 2016 Jimmiehov, All Rights Reserved
I'm linked with Susie Clevenger at the Imaginary Garden with Real Toads, Where Do I Come From?
5-10-2016: again with the Toads, Tuesday Platform
The photo was taken last year in Eidfjord, Norway (link). We were on a cruise in May 2015 after the graduation of our granddaughter, BP, from High School in London.
Labels: BP, NaPoWriMo 2016, Personal-Challenge-2016, Poem, Real Toads, Syllabic Form
posted by Jim @ 4/25/2016 11:54:00 PM
6 comments
6 Comments:
Ha... there are days I truly have urchin feels... a beat of brine inside.. love how far you got back
Love the form. I agree with Bjorn, I have those "urchin" days. Thanks so much for writing for the prompt!
I like this one, Jim. Where we come from is quite an unsolved mystery. I like the idea of coming from the sea.
This was a fun read. Thanks.
Thank you for sharing your secret self!
The form really works well here.
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