Sunday, February 21, 2016

Snowy night car play - μ Poetry, a tinge of e e cummings


Up the street from the Blair (Nebraska) MacDonald's on a snowy December morning

snowflakes lighting on
moscow streets gives inklings of
stay-at-home evening
 
highway's run move them
off the streets дорогие полиции 
please dear politsii
 
make space for us
skillful drivers midnight boys
snowy night street racers 
 
(now a refrain, e e cumming style)
 
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k
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s . . p
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f
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16 Comments:

At Saturday, February 20, 2016 7:42:00 PM, Blogger Magaly Guerrero said...

"snowy night street racers"

That sounds scary (and thrilling) in so many ways...

 
At Saturday, February 20, 2016 9:08:00 PM, Blogger kaykuala said...

Very innovative way of doing it Dr Jim!

Hank

 
At Saturday, February 20, 2016 9:10:00 PM, Blogger Margaret said...

Fun! Hey in answer to your question about the Empire State Bldg: 1956: As a symbol of welcome and freedom to visitors, four large beacon lights are installed at the foot of the tower known as “The Freedom Lights.”

 
At Saturday, February 20, 2016 10:35:00 PM, Blogger De said...

WONDERFUL.
I have no idea how to do this sort of thing in Wordpress. It's awesome!

 
At Saturday, February 20, 2016 10:59:00 PM, Blogger C.C. said...

"inklings of stay-at-home evening"---I like the warmth that evokes :-)

 
At Sunday, February 21, 2016 12:40:00 AM, Blogger Kerry O'Connor said...

What a different perspective to the one we are used to!

 
At Sunday, February 21, 2016 1:01:00 AM, Blogger brudberg said...

I can see those racing cars through the snowy racers...

 
At Sunday, February 21, 2016 8:00:00 AM, Blogger Carol Campbell said...

Very nice shape poetry! I like the wordplay you used!

 
At Sunday, February 21, 2016 9:45:00 AM, Blogger Outlawyer said...

Ha. Super clever, Jim. I love the Moscow references which because of the Cyrillic alphabet fit so well with the shaped refrain. Thanks. k.

 
At Sunday, February 21, 2016 11:18:00 AM, Blogger angieinspired said...

that's some snow! i like how you plowed your words down the white space

 
At Sunday, February 21, 2016 2:33:00 PM, Blogger Other Mary said...

Heehee - well done, Jim.

 
At Sunday, February 21, 2016 4:00:00 PM, Blogger Sherry Blue Sky said...

Amazing to have visited Russia, Jim.

 
At Monday, February 22, 2016 5:26:00 AM, Blogger Marian said...

Nice. Makes me wish for more of a travelogue. Watch out, go speed racer, go!

 
At Monday, February 22, 2016 11:52:00 AM, Blogger Bekkie Sanchez said...

Staying at home waiting for the plows to come makes you hope the plow driver shows up! Lol! Good job.

 
At Tuesday, February 23, 2016 11:27:00 AM, Blogger colleen said...

Hi Jim, I like snowflakes lighting give inklings. That word inklings is my word of the day

 
At Thursday, February 25, 2016 12:52:00 AM, Blogger Susie Clevenger said...

The cold keeping us inside, connected...love that. I also love the nod to ee cumming

 

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