Thursday, February 18, 2016

Shocking!! Brief!! -- a little Senryū poem for you

Don't tell, do me in  
Poised and perky, Tesla coil
I'm easily shocked

Large coil producing 3.5 meter (10 foot) streamer arcs
picture courtesy of Wikipedia,
 
Senryū Poem Copyright © 2016 Jimmiehov, All Rights Reserved

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16 Comments:

At Thursday, February 18, 2016 10:51:00 AM, Blogger Mama Zen said...

I think it's a pretty neat take, Jim! Hope all is well with Mr. Jim.

 
At Thursday, February 18, 2016 12:06:00 PM, Blogger Magaly Guerrero said...

Fun! Totally electric. :-D

 
At Thursday, February 18, 2016 12:26:00 PM, Blogger Kerry O'Connor said...

Ha! Great literal take on the prompt, Jim.

 
At Thursday, February 18, 2016 1:27:00 PM, Blogger Cie Cheesemeister said...

Cool. And shocking. I love it!

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At Thursday, February 18, 2016 5:54:00 PM, OpenID rhymeswithbug.com said...

oh yes, bravo!

 
At Thursday, February 18, 2016 7:07:00 PM, Blogger De said...

Pithy work here. Well done.

 
At Thursday, February 18, 2016 10:52:00 PM, Blogger Vandana Sharma said...

Really a shocker!

 
At Friday, February 19, 2016 11:25:00 AM, Blogger Sherry Blue Sky said...

Lol. Perfect!

 
At Friday, February 19, 2016 12:53:00 PM, Blogger Bekkie Sanchez said...

Now that, is a shocker! Stay inside the cage please. Lol!

 
At Friday, February 19, 2016 1:00:00 PM, Blogger brudberg said...

Totally shocking... I jolt from the bolt.

 
At Friday, February 19, 2016 3:01:00 PM, Blogger Carol Campbell said...

Wonderful response!

 
At Friday, February 19, 2016 7:23:00 PM, Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Nice response Jim.

Much love...

 
At Friday, February 19, 2016 7:27:00 PM, Blogger kaykuala said...

It was meant to shock at higher voltage perhaps.

Hank

 
At Saturday, February 20, 2016 9:14:00 AM, Blogger Other Mary said...

Ha - now that is shocking!

 
At Saturday, February 20, 2016 6:57:00 PM, Blogger Susie Clevenger said...

Love your take on shocking...Hope all is well with Mrs. Jim

 
At Saturday, February 20, 2016 9:55:00 PM, Blogger Sara McNulty said...

Good one, Jim!

 

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