Wednesday, January 22, 2014

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Your eyes

Your eyes are revealing tunnels,
leading inwards. I peer through them,
right down into your heart.

There I see pure beauty, the most kind,
generous, and helpful person ever could be.
Your middle name is "HELP".

The others agree, it's refined gold,
24-carrot, inside. They've received your help
or have seen your gifts to those with needs.

God blesses those who have helped angels unaware.

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Photo and Poem  Copyright © 2014 Jimmiehov. All Rights Reserved

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I am linked today with the Real Toads, Wednesday with Peggy
The eyes belong to Mrs. Jim.  I am serious about what I said, to me it is her being.

 Peggy's directives: She said,
"It's in the Eyes
  This week I want you to write about eyes.
What do you see when you look in someone's eyes?  There are many things to be seen in eyes. Sometimes joy, pain, love, hate, acceptance, sadness, anger, mischief, innocence, evil or even blankness.
As an added twist, try to keep your poem to 75 words or less."

I used 65 words today, plus two for the title.

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8 Comments:

At Wednesday, January 22, 2014 11:02:00 PM, Blogger Susan said...

Wonderful to follow this narrator's seeing within the eyes and heart. It reveals his/her own grace.

 
At Thursday, January 23, 2014 7:32:00 AM, Blogger Sumana Roy said...

a journey to an angel...

 
At Thursday, January 23, 2014 10:18:00 AM, Blogger Susie Clevenger said...

What a beautiful person seen through your eyes

 
At Thursday, January 23, 2014 4:41:00 PM, Blogger Helen said...

This is an exquisite tribute to Ms. Jim.

 
At Friday, January 24, 2014 4:43:00 AM, Blogger Robyn Greenhouse said...

Such a sweet poem to one lucky Mrs. Jim!

 
At Friday, January 24, 2014 7:33:00 PM, Blogger Peggy said...

Beautiful person seen through eye tunnels. Nice writing.

 
At Friday, January 24, 2014 8:55:00 PM, Blogger kaykuala said...

The eyes never fail. Demure, dreamy and dole-like the eyes hug at emotions and last a lifetime of memories! Great Tribute Dr Jim!

Hank

 
At Tuesday, January 28, 2014 5:11:00 PM, Blogger audrey` said...

Mrs Jim has a pair of very caring eyes :)

 

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