One Single Impression: Gold
With This Ring
I love you, he whispered softly.
Oh you silly thing you, said she.
Of course I do, I wear your ring
and sing your song, a song of life.
Of life and love, babies, children,
my children you're the mother of.
Yes, I remember well that day,
committing you my love to stay.
My token, flowered band of gold.
You gave me your all, heart and soul.
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I love you, he whispered softly.
Oh you silly thing you, said she.
Of course I do, I wear your ring
and sing your song, a song of life.
Of life and love, babies, children,
my children you're the mother of.
Yes, I remember well that day,
committing you my love to stay.
My token, flowered band of gold.
You gave me your all, heart and soul.
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"Gold" as prompt was suggested
by BlueMist at Ambrosian Ecstasy
"Gold" as prompt was suggested
by BlueMist at Ambrosian Ecstasy
Labels: Loose Rhyme, One Single Impression, Poem, Rhyme, Syllabic Form
posted by Jim @ 2/14/2010 12:05:00 AM
18 comments
18 Comments:
This was touching. A true valentine poem! You constantly amaze with your versatility.. which you attain to perfection.
Simply loved this line...
"You gave me your all, heart and soul."
Love is in the air..
Happy Valentines Day
A most timely and lovely poem.
It's a romantic poem, apt for this Valentine's occasion...and reminiscent of that golden past with that golden ring that is a manifestation of a true, unending love you have for each other!
I can say, wow...Jim!
Beautiful love poem. Happy Valentine's Day, Jim.
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What a wonderful, loving poem. These two people are very lucky to have each other! :~)
congratulations....I love those thoughts Jim..!!
what a wonderful valentine's day poem.. golden verses of love! :)
good work Jim :)
Wonderful last line...
words broken into tiny pieces
lovely poem of enduring love!
A beautiful tribute to the love you share. So totally wonderful.
sweet and nice!!!
i love you jim..happy valentine's day!
Dear Jim,
Awww. I love this mushy poem, especially "love is in the air." Someday I so want to meet you and Mrs. Jim! That wedding band is unusual and gorgeous! Do you know the song "Cherish"?
Jim, very well written. Obviously passion and love to that special one. Heartfelt and inspiring to me. I thought some of the words seemed like what you might read on a really nice Valentines Day card.
Ah, Jim. This is very sweet. I hope you wrote this in your Valentine.
LOVED that!!! What a perfect Valentine's gift for Mrs. Jim- I am sure she loved it too!
Wonderful poem. I like your impression of gold. The gold ring certainly bears the image of lifelong commitment.
Very sweet. Your wife is a lucky woman!
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