Sunday, February 14, 2010

One Single Impression: Gold

With This Ring

I love you, he whispered softly.
Oh you silly thing you, said she.

Of course I do, I wear your ring
and sing your song, a song of life.
Of life and love, babies, children,
my children you're the mother of.

Yes, I remember well that day,
committing you my love to stay.
My token, flowered band of gold.
You gave me your all, heart and soul.

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"Gold" as prompt was suggested
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18 Comments:

At Saturday, February 13, 2010 11:30:00 PM, Anonymous The Dark Lord said...

This was touching. A true valentine poem! You constantly amaze with your versatility.. which you attain to perfection.

 
At Sunday, February 14, 2010 2:09:00 AM, Anonymous geeta said...

Simply loved this line...

"You gave me your all, heart and soul."
Love is in the air..


Happy Valentines Day

 
At Sunday, February 14, 2010 3:41:00 AM, Blogger anthonynorth said...

A most timely and lovely poem.

 
At Sunday, February 14, 2010 5:40:00 AM, Blogger Amity said...

It's a romantic poem, apt for this Valentine's occasion...and reminiscent of that golden past with that golden ring that is a manifestation of a true, unending love you have for each other!

I can say, wow...Jim!

 
At Sunday, February 14, 2010 7:01:00 AM, Blogger Nessa said...

Beautiful love poem. Happy Valentine's Day, Jim.

http://esotericuncovered.today.com/2010/02/14/the-year-of-the-golden-tiger/

 
At Sunday, February 14, 2010 7:05:00 AM, Blogger Sweetest in the Gale said...

What a wonderful, loving poem. These two people are very lucky to have each other! :~)

 
At Sunday, February 14, 2010 7:11:00 AM, Blogger Sandra (if) said...

congratulations....I love those thoughts Jim..!!

 
At Sunday, February 14, 2010 8:30:00 AM, Blogger The Amateur Poet said...

what a wonderful valentine's day poem.. golden verses of love! :)

good work Jim :)

 
At Sunday, February 14, 2010 9:53:00 AM, Blogger gautami tripathy said...

Wonderful last line...

words broken into tiny pieces

 
At Sunday, February 14, 2010 2:58:00 PM, Blogger Tammie Lee said...

lovely poem of enduring love!

 
At Sunday, February 14, 2010 8:09:00 PM, Blogger SandyCarlson said...

A beautiful tribute to the love you share. So totally wonderful.

 
At Sunday, February 14, 2010 9:53:00 PM, Anonymous shraddha said...

sweet and nice!!!

i love you jim..happy valentine's day!

 
At Monday, February 15, 2010 12:08:00 AM, Anonymous Gel said...

Dear Jim,

Awww. I love this mushy poem, especially "love is in the air." Someday I so want to meet you and Mrs. Jim! That wedding band is unusual and gorgeous! Do you know the song "Cherish"?

 
At Monday, February 15, 2010 8:33:00 PM, Blogger Loch Rob said...

Jim, very well written. Obviously passion and love to that special one. Heartfelt and inspiring to me. I thought some of the words seemed like what you might read on a really nice Valentines Day card.

 
At Tuesday, February 16, 2010 2:39:00 PM, Blogger Quiet Paths said...

Ah, Jim. This is very sweet. I hope you wrote this in your Valentine.

 
At Thursday, February 18, 2010 5:31:00 PM, Blogger Patti said...

LOVED that!!! What a perfect Valentine's gift for Mrs. Jim- I am sure she loved it too!

 
At Saturday, February 20, 2010 1:47:00 PM, Blogger The Write Girl said...

Wonderful poem. I like your impression of gold. The gold ring certainly bears the image of lifelong commitment.

 
At Monday, February 22, 2010 11:47:00 PM, Blogger Kathiesbirds said...

Very sweet. Your wife is a lucky woman!

 

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