Trembling ~ Haiku Bones
Trembling Quartet
.. three haiku one senryū
facing fox yet still
mother quail covered her chicks
trembling all the while
hungry small kitten
bold hungry begging tourists
trembling all the while
viper coiled to spring
poor small frog very quiet
trembling all the while
girl on a scooter
hoping he will ride with her
trembling all the while
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Thanks to Nancy and Bruce at Haiku Bones
for the prompt word, trembling.
posted by Jim @ 1/10/2010 12:01:00 AM
11 comments
11 Comments:
there's a whole lotta shaking going on in these haikus......!
Well done! Facets of trembling!
Ah my friend. I just love the Quartet
you have given us. I'm a bit rusty on senryu but I love how you used the last line of each to bind them into one. Just lovely.
A finely tuned series of trembling! Enjoyed these.
I did a treble tremble - your four cover most of the ground...great.
Lovely set of haiku all reflecting survival of the species themes.
Just great, thanks Jim!
Wonderful set of Haiku!
now the waiting....
these are all good. I really like the first one. I have seen a quail momma tremble at my appearance in the field.
Nicely linked set of haiku!
trembling all the while - I like that, it goes well with the poems
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