Electrifying ~ Haiku Bones
das ende
gray-brown killer eel
electrifying no more
was short circuited
Copyright © 2010 Jimmiehov
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Thanks to Nancy and Bruce at Haiku Bones
for the prompt word, electrifying.
Labels: Haiku, Haiku Bones, Poem
11 Comments:
Fun!!! Love that idea of the electric eel having a short circuit and really enjoy when there is humor in poetry. Thanks for the grin your haiku gave me.
wonderful idea -- great write!!
...still thinking on this prompt myself!
Fascinating response to the prompt! Great idea Jim!
Oh that makes me giggle-poor eel.
Funny! A short-circuit where it's helpful to some. Great response!
Hey Jim, why don't you figure out a way to put them on the power grid??
Good poem.
Must have been a shock to the eel.
Thanks for stopping by, Jim. NC is very good to me. And I am grateful.
I like the short-circuit concept too. Enjoyed this poem. Thank you for it.
hahahaha!
Nice one Jim. You have captured the prompt.
Melanie
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