Sunday, January 03, 2010

Electrifying ~ Haiku Bones


das ende
.

gray-brown killer eel
electrifying no more
was short circuited


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Thanks to Nancy and Bruce at Haiku Bones
for the prompt word, electrifying.

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11 Comments:

At Sunday, January 03, 2010 8:49:00 AM, Anonymous Robin said...

Fun!!! Love that idea of the electric eel having a short circuit and really enjoy when there is humor in poetry. Thanks for the grin your haiku gave me.

 
At Sunday, January 03, 2010 12:08:00 PM, Anonymous angie said...

wonderful idea -- great write!!

...still thinking on this prompt myself!

 
At Sunday, January 03, 2010 1:02:00 PM, Blogger Nancy Bea Miller said...

Fascinating response to the prompt! Great idea Jim!

 
At Sunday, January 03, 2010 1:14:00 PM, Blogger Debra Kay said...

Oh that makes me giggle-poor eel.

 
At Sunday, January 03, 2010 3:32:00 PM, Blogger Tumblewords: said...

Funny! A short-circuit where it's helpful to some. Great response!

 
At Monday, January 04, 2010 3:12:00 PM, OpenID fourwindshaiga said...

Hey Jim, why don't you figure out a way to put them on the power grid??
Good poem.

 
At Monday, January 04, 2010 7:38:00 PM, Anonymous Stan Ski said...

Must have been a shock to the eel.

 
At Tuesday, January 05, 2010 8:52:00 PM, Blogger SandyCarlson said...

Thanks for stopping by, Jim. NC is very good to me. And I am grateful.

 
At Wednesday, January 06, 2010 7:00:00 AM, Anonymous Yousei Hime said...

I like the short-circuit concept too. Enjoyed this poem. Thank you for it.

 
At Thursday, January 07, 2010 9:57:00 PM, Blogger Artist Victoria O'Neill said...

hahahaha!

 
At Saturday, January 09, 2010 11:26:00 AM, Blogger Cassiopeia Rises said...

Nice one Jim. You have captured the prompt.


Melanie

 

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