Sunday, August 24, 2008

One single impression: Resolve

I Resolve To Judge

I resolve to make
this old world I live in now
people please fix you

I resolve to make
my neighbors all behave do
a basket case they

I resolve to change
my family dear you're a fright
bicker and fight you

I'm so glad not me
that needs to clean up his act
no changes need I

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Resolve To Judge I

First my logs cast out
fore the specks in others' eyes
my Lord speaks hear I
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Tag: Jim's OSI

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9 Comments:

At Sunday, August 24, 2008 4:45:00 PM, Blogger Sioux said...

Amen!

 
At Sunday, August 24, 2008 7:40:00 PM, Blogger SandyCarlson said...

The irony is beautiful, Jim. Thanks.

 
At Sunday, August 24, 2008 10:30:00 PM, Blogger Raven said...

Delightful! Well done.

 
At Monday, August 25, 2008 5:03:00 AM, Blogger anthonynorth said...

Very ironic pieces. I liked them.

 
At Monday, August 25, 2008 9:06:00 AM, Blogger barbs.haiku said...

Love these, Jim! Fun pieces, all!

 
At Monday, August 25, 2008 10:30:00 AM, Blogger gautami tripathy said...

Cool!

Ruing

 
At Monday, August 25, 2008 11:33:00 AM, OpenID teric said...

Love how you wrote this with tongue in cheek.

 
At Monday, August 25, 2008 2:52:00 PM, Blogger tumblewords said...

Interesting work! Enjoyed reading it!

 
At Tuesday, August 26, 2008 4:26:00 PM, OpenID fourwindshaiga said...

Your poem made me laugh. I think I saw a bit of me in your I.

 

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