Sunday, August 17, 2008

One single impression: The Homecoming



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Adi's Greeting

Welcome home dear girl
You've been missing, gone all year
Welcome back, dear girl

Welcome too dear boy
You've not been here for a year
You've been gone too long

Oh how I missed you
Love you both, I do, I do
Cry out, wag my tail

I kiss you and cry
I climb up for your caress
Say you love me too!

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One Single Impression

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19 Comments:

At Saturday, August 16, 2008 10:47:00 PM, Anonymous gautami tripathy said...

I loved the last stanza!

strange it may seem to some

 
At Saturday, August 16, 2008 11:15:00 PM, Blogger Geraldine said...

Oh how sweet! Great use of the prompt.

www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.com

 
At Sunday, August 17, 2008 2:14:00 AM, Blogger Edward S Gault said...

That was a cute video. I enjoyed the point of view poem.
Excellent!-thank you for sharing it.

 
At Sunday, August 17, 2008 5:46:00 AM, Blogger barbs.haiku said...

Adi's joy is nearly uncontainable! Love this, Jim!!

 
At Sunday, August 17, 2008 7:15:00 AM, Blogger SandyCarlson said...

Jim,
I love the affection in this poem. Beautiful.

 
At Sunday, August 17, 2008 9:49:00 AM, Blogger the teach said...

Jim, my eyes are filled with tears...Oh it's just wonderful! :)

 
At Sunday, August 17, 2008 10:07:00 AM, Anonymous Deborah Godin said...

That's a wonderful interpretation of the prompt, there's nothing like a dog's love!

 
At Sunday, August 17, 2008 4:27:00 PM, Blogger Lenore said...

I loved this! It sort of reminded me of the great sticker I saw once that read 'please God help me be the person my dog thinks I am' but better. :)

 
At Monday, August 18, 2008 9:41:00 AM, Blogger Raven said...

Now that's puppy love! So sweet.

 
At Monday, August 18, 2008 4:34:00 PM, Anonymous one more believer said...

me too i wanna cry... thrz nothing so perfect as an affectionate greeting from a loving dog... say you love me too.. now that line put it all into perspective thank you.. when i get home 2nite i'll hug her twice as much... thank you

 
At Monday, August 18, 2008 5:33:00 PM, Blogger ellen b. said...

Ahh. That is so darn sweet. Must warm the heart to be loved unconditionally like that :0)

 
At Monday, August 18, 2008 5:44:00 PM, Anonymous Pam said...

Isn't it wonderful how a dog's greeting can make you feel!

 
At Monday, August 18, 2008 7:11:00 PM, Blogger tumblewords said...

Really enjoyable!!

 
At Tuesday, August 19, 2008 6:12:00 AM, Blogger scatterhaiku said...

very nice. :) i like that the doggie refers to them as dear girl and dear boy. and how, not having viewed the video, i only at the end realized from which point of view the lines were being said. :)

 
At Tuesday, August 19, 2008 9:04:00 AM, Blogger Patois said...

What a delightful series and video. A great take on the prompt. Welcome home, indeed.

 
At Tuesday, August 19, 2008 3:32:00 PM, Blogger qualcosa di bello said...

you are going to make me cry! this poem is pure love & joy!!

 
At Wednesday, August 20, 2008 2:25:00 PM, OpenID teric said...

So sweet. Animals can be our life and a homecoming is always great.

 
At Thursday, August 21, 2008 3:04:00 PM, Blogger fishing guy said...

Jim: I really like your first two lake shots.

 
At Wednesday, August 27, 2008 2:11:00 PM, Blogger system operator said...

Great viedeo:) They just are so lovable:)

 

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