Friday, September 21, 2018

I loved, I ... -- a Poem

Fräulein to Frau
Mox nicht and with a shrug 
of the shoulders 
she left 
It looked so easy but we all knew  
She would be crying all night 

So did it really matter?   
Indeed it did, she loved that bum 
with a passion 
not known since Cleopatra 
pulled her big stunt 

A happy ending here,
she did recover 
and lived 
happily ever after  
She was 
just one of the many 
better for loving 
and losing  

Mox nicht 
with the world 
nor us, her 

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 - Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2018, All Rights Reserved 
 - I'm linked with Fireblossom, aka Shay, in the Imaginary Garden at
 - I couldn't resist writing as my recollections of three semesters said, "Pay up."

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At Saturday, September 22, 2018 2:11:00 AM, Blogger Sherry Blue Sky said...

The cads do us gals a favor when they leave, though it takes us a little while to realize it.

At Saturday, September 22, 2018 11:26:00 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

well done ~ I really like the opening stanza - it just reads so well, offers the "pretense" of being hard, yet tells us of the soft - and sets up the truth of loving - wrong, badly, etc. ... and well, happily ever after? it can be a vague determination anyhow.

At Saturday, September 22, 2018 2:12:00 PM, Blogger hyperCRYPTICal said...

Well done and well considered Jim.
Losing the love of someone we love is a hurtful thing, but I guess it is part of life experience and softly propels us on the path to find 'the right one.'
Did for me.
Anna :o]

At Monday, September 24, 2018 9:42:00 AM, Blogger annell4 said...

It seems "endings" are never really happy occasions, but later we are grateful!


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