A November Poem for Pantry of Poetry and Prose juat Poets United
That First Kiss
I've got this thing
and your face reminded me again,
of trying and not ever knowing,
to
remember the first girl
I ever kissed
or vice versa.
Can you yours?
I do remember a couple
of other firsts, critical two
One in the first grade,
the other way after
I had dropped out of college
but I can't recall the first girl
I ever kissed
or vice versa
You might exchange the question,
boy for the girl Was he handsome,
thin or muscular,
dark or light skinned,
or perhaps like your dad
or your brother (it may have been him)
so can you remember then
the first boy that
you ever kissed
I don't remember mine
I wish that I could
She's not a place holder
with the numbers in my mind
She may have been
the girl in the first grade,
the one who took me
by my hand down into
the storm cellar steps
but if she was
I don't remember
that (part)
so can you remember then
the first girl or boy that
you ever kissed
Well?
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- Photo and Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2011 and 2019 respectively, All Rights Reserved
- I am linked with Magaly Guerrero in the Pantry of Poetry and Prose at Poets United, http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/2019/11/pantry-of-poetry-and-prose-2.html?m=1
- The street you see becomes London's Abbey Road ahead at the corner. That corner crossing is the one pictured on the Beatles prized album jacket. We were staying with our daughter and her family in a flat building over the sidewalk fence.
Labels: First times, Love Poem, Poetry Pantry, Poets United, prose poem, Walk Pictures
10 Comments:
You know, I would have thought I could, but now I'm not sure. Was it Kent Welsh when we were 6 or 7? Or didn't we? Was it that friend of my cousin's when I was 16? If it was, that was all it was. I remember the ones with those who turned out to be important in my life.
Yes, I do remember and many years later after we had both lost our own partners we linked up again but only on Facebook. Sadly she died back in July.
You never forget your first kiss :-) I enjoyed reading this.
I remember it vividly. Mostly because he was the best friend of one of my brothers. He kissed me without my consent. I was 14, and nearly broke his jaw in response. After all this year, he still twitches a bit when he sees me (perhaps because I still glare at him, and every now and again, show him my fist).
Well said, Jim. I LOVE that you were at Abbey Road. Sigh.
I think I know... but I don't remember the girl... but I do remember how it felt... the closeness of lips... yes that first sensation I do remember.
I remember it like it was yesterday! Beautiful poem, Jim ❤️
You know, I have no memory of that first kiss--I think I was so busy trying to be something I wasn't in those days, that the actual memory is elusive--Like this piece a bunch!
Jim,
Loved your poem. An upbeat read..First boy kiss was my husband of forty years, all those years ago!!!
Of course I can remember the first kiss...but I'll never tell who it was! :)
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