A Challenge Poem, Transforminng Nature
On My Wild Side
My horse, made of steel
It drinks gas and belches smoke
Not one grain of oat
My canyons, secure
Steel beams, enclosed and girded
Rivers of people
My instincts, run wild
Silicon valley produced
Flash memories know
Poem Copyright, © 2014 Jimmiehov, All Rights Reserved
Picture Credits:
- Top: Harley Davidson Superlow, 1200T (Touring) http://www.harley-davidson.com. Although I still have a motorcycle endorsement on my driver's license I haven't ridden one of my own since our youngest child, Karen, was born in the 70's. I did have one and rode it at the time of our marriage.
- Center: New York City streets in 1936, near the present World Trade Center area. Wikipedia, Radio Row-Berenice Abbott, Public Domain, (Link)
- Bottom: Copyright, © 2012 Jimmiehov, All Rights Reserved. (I paid $5.00 for this old Underwood electric back when the college where I was teaching phased out typewriters in favor of computers with keyboards.)
I am linked with Hanna at the Real Toads, Transforming Friday with Nature's Wonders.
- Hannah's challenge was to " include these canyons in your work...it could be the setting, color, sound quality or even explore the canyon in metaphor - the choice is yours."
- The Canyon that Hannah referred to was Antelope Canyon in Arizona. It "was formed by erosion of Navajo Sandstone, primarily due to flash flooding and secondarily due to other sub-aerial processes. Rainwater, especially during monsoon season, runs into the extensive basin above the slot canyon sections, picking up speed and sand as it rushes into the narrow passageways. Over time the passageways eroded away, making the corridors deeper and smoothing hard edges in such a way as to form characteristic 'flowing' shapes in the rock." (for more, see the Wikipedia article, here)
Labels: Personal-Challenge-2014, Poem, Real Toads, Senryū, Things to know
11 Comments:
I enjoyed your approach. Well done!
Seems we have given up the terrain of our ancestors for the steel beamed structures of the city.
Maybe at the end we will be canyon dwellers just like our ancestors... just in steel and oil instead.
I'm glad you found a way to explore the canyons, Jim. Thank you for joining the challenge today!
truly a different type of canyon
Cityscape canyons... not as pretty
Jim, this is an intriguing response to the prompt - city canyons,.,,,,,,not quite as spiritual! Though I suppose that depends upon the person:)
A canyon of city buildings with its dwellers.
It was only yesterday when I thought to myself that I had not been on a motorcycle before. My child had rode on one, Dr Jim :)
How clever is this canyon! I love how you conjured up so many structures and insight!
Love your take on the prompt
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