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Sunday, February 07, 2010

Breath ~ Haiku Bones

the breathalyzer

breathe out copper said
now what o what would he find
I just held my breath

Poem Copyright © 2010 Jimmiehov
All Rights Reserved

Thanks to Gia's Spot at My Haiku
for the prompt word, single.

Find more haiku at Haiku Bones

Jim at 2/07/2010 12:01:00 AM

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11 comments:

Gemma WisemanSunday, February 07, 2010 12:51:00 AM
Smiled when I read this! Wonder how many try holding their breath?
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ladygarfieldSunday, February 07, 2010 1:13:00 AM
ha ha! fun read!
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NessaSunday, February 07, 2010 5:30:00 AM
Haiku realism.

The Simple Things Challenge
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gautami tripathySunday, February 07, 2010 9:27:00 AM
Loved it!

cryptic messages

Also don't forget to post your creative works at Monday Poetry Train Revisitedon Monday mornings!
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Debra KaySunday, February 07, 2010 11:53:00 AM
I love it-you rascal you!
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spiritsoflenaSunday, February 07, 2010 5:38:00 PM
Very clever--really enjoyed it!
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angieSunday, February 07, 2010 7:20:00 PM
ha!
(made me choke on my beer!)
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TeriSunday, February 07, 2010 8:59:00 PM
Oh funny!!
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Tumblewords:Sunday, February 07, 2010 11:32:00 PM
Hm. Wonder if that would work? :) Neat!
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Ron BloomquistMonday, February 08, 2010 12:12:00 PM
Copper? Oh yeah, Copper!

That one!

Great!
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Lisa at GreenbowFriday, February 12, 2010 8:06:00 AM
A scary moment.
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