Sunday, February 07, 2010

Breath ~ Haiku Bones

the breathalyzer

breathe out copper said
now what o what would he find
I just held my breath

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Thanks to Gia's Spot at My Haiku
for the prompt word, single.

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posted by Jim @ 2/07/2010 12:01:00 AM   11 comments

11 Comments:

At Sunday, February 07, 2010 12:51:00 AM, Blogger Gemma Wiseman said...

Smiled when I read this! Wonder how many try holding their breath?

 
At Sunday, February 07, 2010 1:13:00 AM, Blogger ladygarfield said...

ha ha! fun read!

 
At Sunday, February 07, 2010 5:30:00 AM, Blogger Nessa said...

Haiku realism.

The Simple Things Challenge

 
At Sunday, February 07, 2010 9:27:00 AM, Blogger gautami tripathy said...

Loved it!

cryptic messages

Also don't forget to post your creative works at Monday Poetry Train Revisitedon Monday mornings!

 
At Sunday, February 07, 2010 11:53:00 AM, Blogger Debra Kay said...

I love it-you rascal you!

 
At Sunday, February 07, 2010 5:38:00 PM, Blogger spiritsoflena said...

Very clever--really enjoyed it!

 
At Sunday, February 07, 2010 7:20:00 PM, Anonymous angie said...

ha!
(made me choke on my beer!)

 
At Sunday, February 07, 2010 8:59:00 PM, Blogger Teri said...

Oh funny!!

 
At Sunday, February 07, 2010 11:32:00 PM, Blogger Tumblewords: said...

Hm. Wonder if that would work? :) Neat!

 
At Monday, February 08, 2010 12:12:00 PM, Blogger Ron Bloomquist said...

Copper? Oh yeah, Copper!

That one!

Great!

 
At Friday, February 12, 2010 8:06:00 AM, Blogger Lisa at Greenbow said...

A scary moment.

 

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