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Sunday, November 08, 2009

One Single Impression: Departed





To My Love

don't cry for me now
buy me some flowers—tear then
for I'm departed




Copyright © 2009 Jimmiehov
All Rights Reserved


Find more poems at One Single Impression
"Departed" as prompt was
suggested by Rob at A Small Look Inside




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20 comments:

  1. Yellow TulipSaturday, November 07, 2009 8:55:00 PM

    :)..loved the flower part..:).there is somethin for u:)..do collect it sir

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  2. AnonymousSaturday, November 07, 2009 10:30:00 PM

    a haiku well written! :)
    very nice on Sir Jim :)

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  3. gautami tripathySunday, November 08, 2009 2:37:00 AM

    I too wish for that...

    a winter tale

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  4. anthonynorthSunday, November 08, 2009 3:21:00 AM

    You've captured the spirit of the word here. Excellent.

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  5. AnonymousSunday, November 08, 2009 3:26:00 AM

    stunning haiku!!

    made my eyes wet..

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  6. AmitySunday, November 08, 2009 4:09:00 AM

    very sad one Jim,

    would love to have lots of flowers when i will depart, too!!!

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  7. SandyCarlsonSunday, November 08, 2009 5:25:00 AM

    Touching, Jim. Thanks.

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  8. Loch RobSunday, November 08, 2009 5:50:00 AM

    Jim,
    Very nice sunset photo and use of the prompt. I actually wrote two works and could not decide which to post. My second piece is along your exacting theme, called "A Simple Good-bye". Thank you for your kind comments on my post and blog.

    http://sfrobbins.blogspot.com/2009/11/simple-good-bye.html

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  9. NessaSunday, November 08, 2009 6:26:00 AM

    Well done.

    Sunny Sunday #5 - Paper Sol

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  10. Sherri B.Sunday, November 08, 2009 8:10:00 AM

    What a beautiful and poignant haiku...I was very touched by this one.

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  11. sgreerpittSunday, November 08, 2009 10:07:00 AM

    very elegant, Jim. Interesting factoid -- in Judaism there are no flowers at funerals. Lot's of flowers for the living and the sick, but none at funerals.

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  12. floretaSunday, November 08, 2009 1:06:00 PM

    this one's sad! :(

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  13. Sandra.ifSunday, November 08, 2009 5:31:00 PM

    sweet and simple...!

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  14. GelSunday, November 08, 2009 11:15:00 PM

    tender & romantic

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  15. Tumblewords:Monday, November 09, 2009 6:33:00 PM

    Touching and thoughtful. Enjoyed reading.

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  16. JukotaTuesday, November 10, 2009 5:10:00 PM

    I love little poems that say a lot!

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  17. PattiWednesday, November 11, 2009 11:59:00 AM

    perfect poem for the prompt- And Happy Belated Birthday! Hope it was great!!!

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  18. Kathie BrownWednesday, November 11, 2009 3:32:00 PM

    Jimmie Hov, very succint, but I just read your comment on another blog about your grandmother and it made me so sad! How did a chiroprator kill her? I so loved my own Nana. It is so hard to miss them sometimes but what fond memories I have. It sounds like you do too and I am so sorry for your loss!

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  19. CarlyWednesday, November 11, 2009 11:18:00 PM

    this is so sad!! the top picture is beautiful!

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  20. AnonymousFriday, November 13, 2009 7:48:00 PM

    Flowers are always better...nice verse.

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