One Single Impression: Departed
To My Love
don't cry for me now
buy me some flowers—tear then
for I'm departed
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"Departed" as prompt was
suggested by Rob at A Small Look Inside
"Departed" as prompt was
suggested by Rob at A Small Look Inside
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Labels: One Single Impression, Poem, Senryū
posted by Jim @ 11/08/2009 12:03:00 AM
20 comments
20 Comments:
:)..loved the flower part..:).there is somethin for u:)..do collect it sir
a haiku well written! :)
very nice on Sir Jim :)
I too wish for that...
a winter tale
You've captured the spirit of the word here. Excellent.
stunning haiku!!
made my eyes wet..
very sad one Jim,
would love to have lots of flowers when i will depart, too!!!
Touching, Jim. Thanks.
Jim,
Very nice sunset photo and use of the prompt. I actually wrote two works and could not decide which to post. My second piece is along your exacting theme, called "A Simple Good-bye". Thank you for your kind comments on my post and blog.
http://sfrobbins.blogspot.com/2009/11/simple-good-bye.html
Well done.
Sunny Sunday #5 - Paper Sol
What a beautiful and poignant haiku...I was very touched by this one.
very elegant, Jim. Interesting factoid -- in Judaism there are no flowers at funerals. Lot's of flowers for the living and the sick, but none at funerals.
this one's sad! :(
sweet and simple...!
tender & romantic
Touching and thoughtful. Enjoyed reading.
I love little poems that say a lot!
perfect poem for the prompt- And Happy Belated Birthday! Hope it was great!!!
Jimmie Hov, very succint, but I just read your comment on another blog about your grandmother and it made me so sad! How did a chiroprator kill her? I so loved my own Nana. It is so hard to miss them sometimes but what fond memories I have. It sounds like you do too and I am so sorry for your loss!
this is so sad!! the top picture is beautiful!
Flowers are always better...nice verse.
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