One Single Impression: Assimilation
Assimilation
boy meet girl—you know
assimilation complete
cannot be reversed
assimilation's children
often pay their price dearly
Copyright © 2009 Jimmiehov. All Rights Reserved
boy meet girl—you know
assimilation complete
cannot be reversed
assimilation's children
often pay their price dearly
Copyright © 2009 Jimmiehov. All Rights Reserved
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"Assimilation" as prompt,
suggested by Gautami Tripathy of Rooted
Labels: One Single Impression, Poem, Tanka
posted by Jim @ 6/21/2009 12:03:00 AM
16 comments
16 Comments:
...Yet, how often they crave for the ability to assimilate!... Good one!
Assimilation can have its rewards and penalties! Interesting write!
Nicely done. But they will, of course, go on and do it themselves.
So true, Jim.
a lot of truth in those few lines.
Assimilation is the way forward,against hate and ignorance.
fun and to the point. seems somethings in this life have a huge pull to be assimilated!
Yes they do! Painfully true.
What a wonderfully honest take on this prompt. Great read!
Part of youthful rebellion sometimes brings about a reversal of sorts.
Yes..afterwards..only regrets...
stolen from the air
Results can differ in assimilations people do make.
What a wry take on biological imperatives! The taut form underscores the message.
So very true Jim and well done - I believe with understanding and love we can sometimes overcome these difficulties.
Oh, yes, for sure! Nice...
Excellent interpretation of the prompt Jim- I liked it! Thank you sooo much for your kind words- this weeke and always. I look forward to visiting the blogs you suggested- I really appreciate it. Take care~
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