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Saturday, March 14, 2020


   Apple not Chosen 

There I was, feeling alone 
Alone in a world of greed 
Like saddened child with a limp 
In the bin crying inside 

Pick me, pick me, cries unheard 
Tears unseen crying inside 
Passed by ugly ducks can't play 
Our team has to win the game 

But in the end no matter 
No matter I was different 
Crippled, darkened skin, alone 
Store's empty, I didn't count 

All must play who needs one more 
Last apple in the bin.  Him? 
Boy with a limp mottled skin 
Least  damage left field he'll play 

Kid who was shunned now at bat 
There hit he did a high home run 
Unwanted child, apple sliced 
Tasty inside, skin was sweet 
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 - Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2020, All Rights Reserved
 - Photo, "Apple, one slice cut" (my name) posted by Fireblossom at the link below
 - I am linked with Fireblossom, Sunday Muse, at  http://thesundaymuse.blogspot.com/2020/03/sunday-muse-99.html?m=1 


10 comments:

  1. Nice story here in your poem Jim. Inspiring write!

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  2. The kids who are shunned grow up to be the most amazing people, likely because they werent part of the herd. Nicely told, Jim.

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  3. Sad, so sad, the child who is always picked last or positioned poorly.

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  4. I can feel the sadness and the reality of being the last one picked.

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  5. This sends the message that no one should be wanted. Every child is a blessing to this world!

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  6. I like the metaphor of how we can't judge an apple by its skin!

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  7. There's something about not being in the "in" crowd that creates and hones a drive and determination to be the very best at what you do … and a bit of a desire to say "Look at me now!" Been there, done that. Good write, Jim.

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  8. There's a great lesson in this. We are way too quick to judge and may lose the ones we need so desperately to unfounded opinions. Stay safe and well!

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