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Saturday, May 25, 2019

Mini Challenge Portraiture Poem


Those Hippie Days

It's been a long time ago now
Way back early seventies

Looking the part, a hippie queen
Pert, smart and smiles pretty too

Knew her before we met, her type
Rode a bike she traveled light

At the foot of the stairs to wait
Parked her bike and yellow dog

Barefoot, cutoff jeans, straggly hair
Looked the part this Hippie queen

I don't remember who sat first
Empty seat between, back row

Differential Equations class
Back there she read History

I learned my Calculus so so
Smart girl she got A's in both

We chummed now and then pleasant girl
Our end at semester's end
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 - Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2019, All Rights Reserved
 - Photo from the Real Toads, Sunday Feature featuring Lisa Graham
 - I'm linked with Kim Russell in the Imaginary Garden at http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2019/05/weekend-mini-challenge-portraiture.html?m=1
 - 105 words, nine couplets, 135 syllables - kinda mini

10 comments:

  1. Your portrait took me back, Jim! I remember the early seventies, when I was also a barefoot hippy chick – in Germany. I enjoyed this trip with you back into the past.

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  2. You have created a clear picture of the girl in question.

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  3. I can see her so clearly, and him too. Such a wonderful capture. All the way to the end...

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  4. Early 70s, we already had a ten year old, nine year old, eight year old, three year old ~~~ I missed the hippy generation!

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    1. Of course I meant "hippie" ... though hippy has been appropriate from time to time over the years!!

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  5. This is such a lovely capture of the girl in question, Jim! ❤️

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  6. When remembering a girl from your youth, you need to remember yourself as well I think...

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  7. I think i know her, too. Tofino has many girls and women like this. Smiles.

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  8. A little before my time, but I could see that blast from the past clearly anyway.

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