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Monday, September 22, 2014

Open-Link-Mondays -- The Sun



The day the sun didn't rise

An ordinary day it seemed to be
The star lights were put out, all wicks were snuffed
Morning dew on grass, deer's last time for wet
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Ducks in  the pond, diving for the big fish
Commuters' long drives were nearly ended
Darker than norm this day, street lights still lit
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Calling from beyond, Sun was sleeping in
Commerce came to a halt, greed froze in place
Couldn't see in dark, folk went back to bed
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Photos and Poem Copyright, © 2014 Jimmiehov, All Rights Reserved
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Today I'm linked with  at the Real Toads, Open Link Monday (link)
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12 comments:

  1. Vandana SharmaMonday, September 22, 2014 2:22:00 AM

    A beautiful cloudy day

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  2. Sumana RoyMonday, September 22, 2014 2:24:00 AM

    Star lights were put out yet street lights still lit....an unusual day when the Sun is sleepy..and such days are round the corner...

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  3. J Cosmo NewberyMonday, September 22, 2014 3:22:00 AM

    Any day's a good day. Weekends are better, of course.

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  4. Marcoantonio Arellano (Nene)Monday, September 22, 2014 4:16:00 AM

    humorsous monday morning ditty.

    you captured the monday commute

    gracias

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  5. brudbergMonday, September 22, 2014 8:23:00 AM

    This is exactly the day today... except I didn't stay in bed alas... clouds and darkness that make me shiver

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  6. Carrie Van HornMonday, September 22, 2014 1:31:00 PM

    Days like that are great for staying in bed and getting some extra rest....especially rainy one. :-)

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  7. audrey`Tuesday, September 23, 2014 12:46:00 AM

    A lovely cooling day, Dr & Mrs Jim :)

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  8. MargaretTuesday, September 23, 2014 1:57:00 PM

    greed froze in place… ah - perhaps its not such a bad thing, then. :)

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  9. AnonymousTuesday, September 23, 2014 2:49:00 PM

    Ouch--greed freezes almost everything but itself. Chillingly expressed. Thanks, Jim. k.

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  10. UnknownWednesday, September 24, 2014 2:47:00 PM

    I love to hunker down on a cold, dark day. Living in the desert, I rarely get the opportunity.

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  11. Magaly GuerreroWednesday, September 24, 2014 11:25:00 PM

    What a great day... the one that drives greed back to sleep... maybe even imagine different ways of being.

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  12. Susie ClevengerThursday, September 25, 2014 2:48:00 PM

    Yes, what a wonderful thought that for a least for one day greed would sleep right through it.

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