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Tuesday, March 05, 2013

One Single Impression: Unlimited

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Never Reached

My love for you has no limits. 
Like the proverbial math pro-
blem, infinity never reached.

It's taller than the London eye,
wider than the Indian Sea,
deeper than Florida sink holes.
 
It's hotter than a fresh pancake,
sweeter than strawberry shortcake.
Would you give me please,
your sweet smile?

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Poem Copyright
© 2013 Jimmiehov
All Rights Reserved

Prompt word suggested by Ramesh Sood of  A Little More Than Ordinary
Find more poems using the "Monday" prompt word at  One Single Impression.
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8 comments:

  1. SandyCarlsonWednesday, March 06, 2013 8:20:00 PM

    Gorgeous poem--tender love. So nice.

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  2. betty-NZWednesday, March 06, 2013 10:35:00 PM

    Aw, how sweet!

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  3. AnonymousWednesday, March 06, 2013 10:54:00 PM

    this is down to earth poetry everyone can relate. it is simple and so sweet.

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  4. Sue SeibertThursday, March 07, 2013 11:22:00 AM

    Lovely!

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  5. Loch RobThursday, March 07, 2013 7:43:00 PM

    Jim,

    I liked the imagery of your poem. As I think about unlimited, I think about that smile from a very special person. Nicely done.

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  6. Amrit SinhaFriday, March 08, 2013 1:18:00 PM

    This is lovely ... love sure is priceless :-)

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  7. Ramesh SoodSaturday, March 09, 2013 11:32:00 AM

    I am sure you got them many times more than you thought.. unlimited..Thanks Jim for this Gem..

    RS

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  8. Kathie BrownTuesday, April 30, 2013 9:01:00 PM

    Cute and beguiling! ;-)

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