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Monday, August 02, 2010


Cody scans his prints, "Yes, tiny front door. Now the cave." Gingerly he approachs, "Smells bad!"
Bats flash—thousands. The rabbits laugh.


(139 characters)
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© 2010 Jimmiehov
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Picture from Susan's blog, Stony River,

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18 comments:

  1. Sylvia KSunday, August 01, 2010 11:37:00 PM

    What a fun take on the pic for the day, Jim! Great giggle to wind down my day! Have a great week!

    Sylvia

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  2. moondustwriterSunday, August 01, 2010 11:59:00 PM

    Some messy hobbits

    nice take on the pic

    you can hear the echos

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  3. SparkleFarkelMonday, August 02, 2010 3:00:00 AM

    Hmm. White Rabbit, right?

    SparkleFarkle~~~~~*

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  4. anthonynorthMonday, August 02, 2010 3:11:00 AM

    That sounds like the hangover from the Mad Hatter's tea party. Nice one.

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  5. Ellie GarrattMonday, August 02, 2010 3:44:00 AM

    Smelly bats! LOL. Love the way the way the last line makes you wonder what is going on.

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  6. John (@bookdreamer)Monday, August 02, 2010 4:15:00 AM

    Rabbits, you can't live with em, you can't live without em. My 140 is here

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  7. jabblogMonday, August 02, 2010 5:29:00 AM

    'Look where you're going' is advice too late for this man! LOL!

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  8. MorningAJMonday, August 02, 2010 5:57:00 AM

    I love the fact that this doesn't make it clear whether Cody's prints are "photographic" or "hoof"!

    Nice story.

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  9. swputhMonday, August 02, 2010 6:23:00 AM

    good one

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  10. Mama BadgerMonday, August 02, 2010 11:41:00 AM

    I might have to come back to this one after a nice glass of wine. Too much logic is getting in the way of my thinking!

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  11. KMonday, August 02, 2010 2:18:00 PM

    Now all you need is a racoon to offer to serve up some tea!

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  12. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallMonday, August 02, 2010 3:17:00 PM

    wow,
    bats, cave, smells.
    what a vivid 140,
    it reminds me of Harry Potter...

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  13. hopeMonday, August 02, 2010 7:19:00 PM

    You never know what you'll find at home in a place like that. :O

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  14. Susan at Stony RiverMonday, August 02, 2010 7:52:00 PM

    Oh those naughty rabbits. I like this!

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  15. EG CameraGirlTuesday, August 03, 2010 2:55:00 PM

    You have a great imagination, Jim.

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  16. Sylvia MoriceTuesday, August 03, 2010 3:01:00 PM

    I think I smell a wabbit! (Courtesy of Elmer Fudd!) Love your post. Great job on this week's picture.

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  17. Bill ~ {The Old Fart}Wednesday, August 04, 2010 9:47:00 AM

    I wonder if Alice put the Rabbits up to it. Great take on the picture.

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  18. Sandra.ifSaturday, August 07, 2010 9:19:00 AM

    I love those old places...and your writing ...so fun Jim...!

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