Evening on the Beach
Beach in Hawaii
The last thing I'll remember
Our ride to the beaches edge
Sand flying from beaches edge
Our blanket thrown on the sand
Things quickly escalated
Sands now became forgotten
Those sands quickly forgotten
Blanket too not remembered
Song, touching you, touching me
"Sweet Caroline"* remembered
Proved they were right all the time
* Neil Diamond song,
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Neil Diamond - Sweet Caroline
Lyrics
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Poem and picture Copyright ©️ jimmiehov 2025, all rights reserved, picture taken and cut from Elvis Presley movie, "Hawaii"
Written in response of Sherry's prompt, "What was remembered" at https://newwhatsgoingon.blogspot.com/?m=1
posted by Jim @ 12/31/2025 04:06:00 PM
2 comments
2 Comments:
A wonderful event to remember, Jim - the edge of the beach........a song playing......I love Neil Diamond's music!!!! Sweet Caroline takes me all the way back............lovely.
To remember the touch is good enough, and it's nice that it happened by the sea. Happy new year, Jim! Keep on writing.
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