Not What We Came Here To See ~~ Micro Poetry, Dodoitsu Form
Expectations?
Alligators in the pond
They came from miles them to see
Gators they saw, something more
Little dogs inhaled
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Photo and poem copyright 2006 and 2016,
@ Jimmiehov, All Rights Reserved
2006 photo posting, http://jimmiehov.blogspot.com/2006/06/another-first-time-for-jim-fishing.html
I'm linked with Kerry O'Conner at the Imaginary Garden with Real Toads, Not What We Came Here To See ~~ Micro Poetry; http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2016/08/not-what-we-came-to-see-micro-poetry.html
This piece of micro poetry, a four line poem, is written in Dodoitsu Form, a Japanese poem form having seven syllables in its first three lines and five in the fourth. Read more, The Writer's Digest, http://www.writersdigest.com/whats-new/dodoitsu-poetic-forms
I am writing this evening with my iPad. I found this alligator in the water at Port Arthur, Texas.
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How about this guy?
He's a Devil not a Man
No, better,
He's a Reptile, not a Fish.
Labels: Animals, Micro Poetry, Poem, Real Toads, Syllabic Form
10 Comments:
That is a very scary sight! Not somethn I'd want to see in my back yard.
I guess even gators have to feed... :-)
Ooh. That's wild.
Well-penned.
-HA
Yikes! I wouldn't want to be that close!
Anna :o]
Gators appear quiet and innocent until transformed at feeding time!
Hank
Oh, poor little dog!!
Creepy but so true
Have a good Sunday
Mine is HERE
much love...
Oh my, scary scary
Oh my! Poor puppies. Bad gators. Very bad gators!
ew, yuck-o
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