Party Girl -- a Challenge poem for the Flash 55 PLUS!
.. . [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TlTKhPkZSJo]
Party girl, what 'cha gonna do tonight
Will you come to my house and do your dance
Mama says you go to extremes a trance
Pretty girl please will you come to my house
Mama won't bite she hasn't ever seen
What you do when you hear music extreme
Forgive me mother
set another plate
. - Photos and Poems Copyright © 2016 Jimmiehov, All Rights Reserved
. - Today I'm linked with Kerry O'Conner at the Real Toads in the Imaginary Garden, to her post, Flash 55 PLUS! Kerry invited us to "join by writing a piece of poetry or prose on a subject of your choice in precisely 55 WORDS. ... the optional extra part of this challenge, I invite you to include the word EXTREME/ EXTREMES in your title or the body of your work." Labels: Flash Writing, Humor(?), Personal-Challenge-2016, Poem, Real Toads, Syllabic Form
posted by Jim @ 3/05/2016 10:42:00 PM
13 comments
13 Comments:
As always, you bring your signature humour to the challenge, Jim.
your close made me smile...love the song :)
Ha.. We all dream about party,.. But in the end we are to scared to join me thinks,
Ha. Very funny. Much enjoyed--hope mom didn't mind. K.
Is that the kinda girl you bring home to mother? lol
I'm with Mary...maybe this one is the type to dance with @ the club. :)
Lovely fun! Thank you.
very cool, Jim ~
Very fun!
Love the sound and movements of this one, Jim! And the voice is so much fun. ;-)
Oh Mama!! I love it when Cosmo Kramer (Seinfeld) says that!
That song brought back memories Jim! Was this a flashback? Enjoyed it much! Hugs!
"Forgive me mother, set another plate" HA! You naughty one, I loved this. Jim, I am sorry I didn't visit after your brilliant comment about "under cover/pillow" with your IPad. Either way, it works, no?
This is fun, funky, and the antidote to my Winter Greys. And yes, there was a time (o, so long ago) when I was that girl!! Love, Amy
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