Coolness
Oh to be cool
Hot days dream of icy lake
Skate into the spray
_ _ _
Poem Copyright, © 2015 Jimmiehov
Today I'm linked with Kristjaan Panneman
at Carpe Diem Special #125, Sogi's first "this autumn sky"
Kristjaan wants us to write in the vein opened by Iio Sogi, a pre-Basho haiku poet. Here is a model for us, one of his works (I believe that his early copyright has expired by now).
ah, for coolness,
it rivals the water's depth -
this autumn sky
© Iio Sogi (1421-1502)
_ _ _
(in my PJs)
.
Me? I got cooled off
just going out this morning
getting the paper
_ _ _
Poem Copyright, © 2015 Jimmiehov
Today I'm linked with Kristjaan Panneman
at Carpe Diem Special #125, Sogi's first "this autumn sky"
Kristjaan wants us to write in the vein opened by Iio Sogi, a pre-Basho haiku poet. Here is a model for us, one of his works (I believe that his early copyright has expired by now).
ah, for coolness,
it rivals the water's depth -
this autumn sky
© Iio Sogi (1421-1502)
_ _ _
(in my PJs)
.
Me? I got cooled off
just going out this morning
getting the paper
Labels: Carpe Diem 15, Haiku, Senryū
posted by Jim @ 1/03/2015 08:42:00 AM
3 comments
3 Comments:
Chuckling about PJs. Love skating into the spray.
It's a joy to visit your blog Jim ... I am always surprised with your wonderful, but extraordinary, responses on the prompts at CDHK. Really this haiku are aweome and I like the humor in it
It has been very cooling and windy in Singapore lately, Dr & Mrs Jim :)
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