Sunday, August 25, 2013

'Colorado' -- a Five Line Fiction, # 001 -- Travel -- Two Shoes Tuesday ~~ Another Poem (of sorts)

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Colorado; ..
five-line fiction .....
(a Texas Divorce) ....

I will be seeing you in a couple of weeks he said, dropping it all on Irma at entirely the improper time.

Are you going someplace, someplace that I too have been dreaming about dearest Moody?

Ollie and I are going to the Rockies for a try at skiing, nothing that you would like dear.

Well then you and Ollie have a good time--by the way, who is Ollie?

(the next morning) Mrs. Mood, I am Lt. Hill of the Texas Rangers here to arrest you for the murder over across the county line in Dallas County of James R. Mood and his companion, Ollivette Skeener (woe to stolen love).

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16 Comments:

At Sunday, August 25, 2013 9:38:00 PM, Blogger Peter said...

Now that's how a Main St should end!!!!!

 
At Monday, August 26, 2013 8:46:00 AM, Blogger Vandana Sharma said...

mysterious!!

 
At Monday, August 26, 2013 11:58:00 AM, Blogger Sherry Blue Sky said...

Yoiks! Succinct, but with a plot big enough for a book. The photo of the main street is wonderful. I love small towns with mountains at the end of the street.

 
At Monday, August 26, 2013 1:02:00 PM, Blogger Mademoiselle Modelle said...

would love read more of this for a mystery novella!

 
At Monday, August 26, 2013 1:45:00 PM, Blogger Kay L. Davies said...

A prose poem with a deadly ending, Jim! Succinct fiction, right? LOL
Love your photos, especially the one of Main Street and the mountains, but I must wonder if anyone else noticed the note above the Telluride sign in the window..."Fish Naked, it adds color to your cheeks"!!
K

 
At Monday, August 26, 2013 2:02:00 PM, Blogger Laura said...

wow what an unexpected twist!

 
At Tuesday, August 27, 2013 2:40:00 PM, Blogger McGuffy Ann said...

You sure packed a lot in there, Mr. Jim! Wow! Have a great trip!

 
At Tuesday, August 27, 2013 2:47:00 PM, Blogger Zoe Byrd said...

whoah!!!!!!!!She seemed like she was a bit too non chalant about it all! What a poker face....wouldn't want to play cards with her!

 
At Tuesday, August 27, 2013 4:19:00 PM, Blogger Josie Two Shoes said...

Ah! She was on to him then, and his little trip with "Ollie" for a bit of stolen love time didn't go so well! I have known an assortment of such sneaky cheaters, most of whom eventually got caught with their proverbial pants down! :-) This was great Jim, you made me smile, and the photos made it all very authentic. Awesome story write for Two Shoes Tuesday, thanks!

 
At Tuesday, August 27, 2013 4:32:00 PM, Blogger ruthinian said...

hmmmm. I will surely put this place in my bucket list of places to visit before I die.

 
At Wednesday, August 28, 2013 10:23:00 AM, Blogger Marian said...

hah! and that's all he wrote. love this.

 
At Thursday, August 29, 2013 1:54:00 PM, Blogger JosephAlsarraf said...

Ouch....she took that pretty harshly. I like the story and great pictures of Colorado! : )

 
At Thursday, August 29, 2013 5:39:00 PM, Blogger Margaret said...

...so much for honesty! :)

 
At Thursday, September 05, 2013 1:17:00 PM, Blogger Gail said...

Should have kept his mouth shut, right?

Great job.

 
At Friday, September 20, 2013 9:43:00 PM, Blogger Kathie Brown said...

Well, that is quite a story! You summed it up in such a neat little package, didn't you!

 
At Friday, October 11, 2013 12:03:00 AM, Blogger audrey` said...

Who are Ollie and Mrs Mood? :)

 

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