One Single Impression: Meld
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Play the cards you draw;I drew my cards counted my meld
I was happy with what was dealt
An ace of beauty blessed my wife
a king of nature gave me life
the queen of soul painted my heart
a Jack of humor spiced my part
The Joker came to make me smile
comedy of life filled the aisles
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Prompt words, Meld, suggested by Patti at Creative Cottage Dreamer
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Labels: Humor(?), One Single Impression, One-Single-Impression, Rhyme, Syllabic Form
posted by Jim @ 11/28/2010 12:03:00 AM
17 comments
17 Comments:
Oh Jim, nice game of cards you play!
Excellent piece.
nice play with words for you cards:)...good one
absolutely delightful, Jim..a game where you would like to keep all the cards..no discarding and yet winning all the way..happily.. God Bless..
This is so lovely... :)
Nice rhyme..loved reading it...
This brought memories of many gatherings of those melds. Fun.
I like the way this hand played out. Well done.
Really God has been kind to you Jim!! A lovely family and graced by a happy life. What is the comedy Jim that the Joker left behind??
dynamite card game...
Oh, what fun this is! I love a good card game - I even am rather fond of bad ones. :0
Hi Jim, I enjoyed this game of cards. Very creative and fun poetry here as always. Hope your Thanksgiving was nice!
a card game aint a game without the Joker
Jim this is so creative an original you have a great way of expressing yourself!
interesting word used in playing cards...thank you!(I am not sure if it is the word we use as "terremoto" in spanish...)
LOVE it Jim- perfect use of the prompt! In the Game of Life, we can only wish for such a hand!
This is so sweet Jim, nice work!
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Jim, I love your poem!
Fantastic.
Very cleverly written!
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