Stress ~~ Sensational Haiku Wednesday
Little Pony
old Mustang is dear
going on thirteen candles
one-fifty no more
her spirit still high
faster than that she would go
one-fifty's too fast
we stop at one-ten
metal fatigue--kill us both
stress her no I'll not
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Labels: Mustang, Poem, Senryū, Sensational Haiku Wednesday
9 Comments:
Fascinating. I never would have considered metal fatigue.
Excellent my friend. I would have never thought about a car. Very well done. I have searched my blog and can't find a 22.png I am wondering if it is that Wibiya tool bar I just installed and looking at the time of your comment it was after I installed that but the blog is suppose to load first and then that so that should be affecting this. If you continue to have that problem let me know. I'll start watching it and see if i can figure out what that 22.png is. :) Have a great Wednesday :)
So fun! Where is Cut and Shoot?!
Great choice for "stress".
Jim you obviously love that car, very nice work on your haiku!!
Excellent! And glad that you're smart - we want you around for a long time ;)
...Great Haiku! This Mustang must have served you well... 13 years and still in such good-looking shape...
You should upload the Haiku you left in 'my comments' and place it here too. I loved it! ...I think it ought to be shared... :)
Good choice! I adore a mustang!!
Thanks for coming to my blog and I am excited to be here!
I dig your haiku style!
Cut and Shoot!??? That is too crazy! Thanks for sharing this!
Linda @ Truthful Tidbits
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