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Sunday, December 14, 2008

One Single Impression: Distractions

Distractions distracted
(a silly ditty using big words)

distractions plus subtractions
equals serious fractions
triggering strong reactions
amongst various factions

distractions less subtractions
equals coming abstractions
bringing happy contractions
uniting these same factions

action interactions

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Tag: One Single Impression Distractions,
prompted today by (thank you) Don't Take My Wings
Tag: Jim's OSI
Painting is easy when you don’t know how, but very difficult when you do. Edgar Dégas
The same goes for my poetry attempts (don't know how, but I enjoy it!).

18 comments:

  1. And I liked all the actions in here!

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  2. Your poem was very distracting, but brought on those happy contractions-Thank you!

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  3. That was fun, Jim! Lots of action going on to keep us distracted!

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  4. Hmmmm....and what of coming attractions?!

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  5. Not participating, but wanted to say hello and have a great day. :)

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  6. A good job of distracting, Jim!

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  7. This poem commits infractions.

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  8. Very fun and thanks for a good smile, Jim!

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  9. aren't words wonderful...all those lovely sounds rolling together.

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  10. so witty-ly distracting... i love it!

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  11. I happen to like this one the best of the two. Sounds like a rap song but I love the play of words!

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  12. a definite abstration of today's distraction...and it all makes such sense.. thank you

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  13. You are so clever with the words, I loved both of them. Thanks for the fun.

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