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Monday, May 05, 2025

Slice of Life to Remember

   A Slice of Life;

     not forgotten 


School day to remember 

I  remember it well 

Into the storm celler 

She led me down the steps 


Little girl little boy 

Innocent boy enticed 

Stopped there on the steps 

There she popped a question 


A question new to me 

You show me yours and then 

Then I will show you mine 

Quickly she pulled our pants 


She knew what to look for 

Looked up and down, around 

I, disappointed blushed 

She'd naught for me to see  

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(Note:  This is a true event, we were 

at school having a first grade recess. )

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 - I am linked with Magaly at Friday Writings # 176 at (below)  

https://poetsandstorytellersunited.blogspot.com/?m=1 .  

 - You can find links to other's writings for readings and comments there.  We had an optional writing thought of "A slice of life" from which I wrote. 

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8 comments:

  1. Having brothers and sisters, or even close cousins, dispels a lot of childish curiosity. You've written this so nicely and lightly, making it sweet, amusing and natural.

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  2. The post takes us too too to our good old days. Nice.

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  3. I have a poem like this too. I guess it's a pretty common occurance. It was NOT my idea either.

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  4. What a question to pop!! You painted the picture with an innocent grace. :)

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  5. Ah yes.....curious little minds. I remember a similar experience but I was the one who didn't know what to look for!!!

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  6. The humour in your poem is naughty and sweet. I can only imagine first graders which seems pretty young, we may have been third graders by the time curiosity approached. I love having you back on Blogger where you belong.

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    1. Thank you, Helen. I enjoy writing and this one pulled my chain. It is good to be back. The girl's daddy took her out for a third grade church school, her mother had died. I never saw her after that. Her older sister stayed.
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