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Wednesday, February 22, 2023

Kissed and Not Told, until Now -- -- a Poem for dVerse Poetics

At the corner ahead is the famous Beatles' corner, Abbey Road


     Kiss Mood Change;
"It's been a long time coming";
since you asked, 70 years ago 

A cool evening for a date, 
    light jackets were in order 
Picked her up oh so promptly 
    at her apartment uptown 
Her name was "Avery" tonight, 
    real name I have forgotten 

Presumtively written here 
My modus operandi 
All I know my Dad's pickup 
    Twas fall, we worked together 
We had parked away from lights 
    parked in the dark, still, we talked 

I remember sitting close 
    Nothing more until we kissed 
That kiss, I'll never forget 
    Expectations I will guess 
Hers I suppose, mine would be 
    Close and warm, lips together 
All that had to be, my guess 

What came next I remember 
    I won't forget my feeling 
My brow met "Avery's" glasses 
    New to me and just this once  
Surprised, glasses new to me,  
  a no no for necking girls?

I am sure I acted nice and 
    was not showing my surprise 
We never dated again 
    I'm not sure why, she was nice 
This kiss is the only one, 
    kiss that I can remember 

And now you know 
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 - Photo and Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2011* and 2023, All Rights Reserved 
 - *I first used this photo on May 5, 2011
 - I'm linked with Rommy who is posting the Friday Writings #65 at 
 - Rommy has invited us to write what comes to mind when we see the phrase, “it’s been a long time coming.”
 - I'm also linked with Kim at dVerse Poetics
 - To read other's writings, click here 
 - Kim wants us to write, her "challenge is to write a poem about kissing, a special kiss that still haunts you, a peck, a snog, a kiss hello or a kiss goodbye. Whatever it is, try to capture the wordless intimacy of the act." 
 - We continued to work together but not for long.  I was drafted into the U.S. Army; that was long ago.  In case you wonder, this really is the ONLY kiss that I can remember.  No other specific kisses.  
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9 comments:

  1. A pleasant memory One to cherish set in a pleasant poem

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  2. Oh, that first kiss is memorable. In the dark. Glasses definitely have to come off!!

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  3. You set the scene so perfectly that it was easy to imagine the cold feel of those glasses against your face. It made me smile. :)

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  4. Hmmm, I don't think it ever occurred to me to take off my glasses. Not for those early kisses in parked cars anyway. I don't remember anyone ever complaining, but I think the boys were probably nearly as shy and awkward as I was. A sweet story you told us, Jim.

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  5. There is no way I could ever forget the names of my first kissers ... I am sorry you have. Glasses removed from one of them ... Miles. Last name omitted to protect the innocent.

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  6. Reminds me of my first kiss with my husband. LOL, now I have reading glasses too, so it's a bit fairer.

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