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Thursday, December 02, 2021

Friday Writings -- a (strong) secondary character point of view



(Door Knock) 

I am the Raven 
 
in a Poem named after me 
I co-star in Mr. Poe's best seller 

in that setting I was a pest at first 
but soon I became her bosom friend 

even so she never really understood me 
she thought she did, read it yourself, you'll see 

she lost her lover and that was her end 
going bat batty trying for more 

knocks on her Chamber Door 
but "Quoth (me,) Raven
"Nevermore""

persistence 
ends 

but I'll remain 
above her Chamber Door 

haunting her always 
for some more

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 - Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2021, All Rights Reserved 
 - I am linked with Rommy at Friday Writings #5 for the prompt idea, she would like for us "to write poetry or prose from the point of view of a secondary character in a story (book, movie, TV show…)",
 - Edgar Allen Poe's poem, "The Raven", can be read here, https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/48860/the-raven 
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9 comments:

  1. Ah, seems to me it was a sad fate for Raven as well.

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  2. LOL the haunting made me giggle the toss up between forever more and nevermore.
    Nice one

    Much💜love

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  3. I honestly think it might be nice to have a raven to chat with, even if he is a bit gloomy.

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  4. Good take on Mr. Poe's poem, and a nice twist to the story.
    It seems this raven is enamored with the lady. :)

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  5. Nicely toyihg with Poe's "Raven", Jim" One can't help but be drawn in.

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  6. Love this personification and the fact that the Raven knows a poem was named after it.

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