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Saturday, September 12, 2020

Little Guy Worries, Poem, Sunday Muse #125


Safe for a Bit?

We missed the arrow today 
Reminder for 'nother day 
While the children are playing 
They know not harm while
 they swing 

Watching closely now I'll be 
Could scamper, quick to the trees 
Shaft's a symbol of our plight 
Against them we cannot fight 
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 - Poem  Copyright, Jimmiehov 2020, All Rights Reserved 
 - For.picture prompt I'm linked with Carrie  Van Horn at The Sunday Muse # 125,  http://thesundaymuse.blogspot.com/2020/09/sunday-muse-125.html?m=1

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11 comments:

  1. robkistnerSaturday, September 12, 2020 6:21:00 PM

    Cautious little fox Jim, accumulating life lessons.

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  2. indybevSaturday, September 12, 2020 6:33:00 PM

    Smart fellow. Make for the trees!

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  3. Carrie Van HornSunday, September 13, 2020 8:49:00 AM

    A fox that knows what to do to survive. Nice write Jim. 😊

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  4. C. SandlinSunday, September 13, 2020 8:51:00 AM

    poor fox

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  5. TruedessaSunday, September 13, 2020 9:03:00 AM

    Missed an arrow today, I think the fox has learned when and where it is safe. I think in today's' world we are all learning to dodge that invisible arrow.

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  6. Sherry Blue SkySunday, September 13, 2020 11:11:00 AM

    Gah, arrows and foxes make me sad. Glad he scampered away, and survived another day.

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  7. indybevSunday, September 13, 2020 11:35:00 AM

    Re your "solution" to Blogger problems, what you suggested works but in small print it says "until September", which means sooner or later we're saddled with this new format. I simply CANNOT find a way to edit text, center it, readjust it in any way. It's absolutely maddening.

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    1. HelenMonday, September 14, 2020 2:27:00 PM

      I have tried, I honestly have .... so damned frustrating I may stop dreaming poems for a bit. And really try to master the format.

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  8. Susie ClevengerSunday, September 13, 2020 2:34:00 PM

    Lesson from a feather...love it

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  9. HelenMonday, September 14, 2020 2:27:00 PM

    This is a poem that only a fox could compose ......

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  10. qbitMonday, September 14, 2020 8:28:00 PM

    I like the feather as the fletching of an arrow that missed. Nicely done.

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