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Wednesday, January 08, 2020

A seond Poem for 2020


 

My Valley

My valley is green when the sky is blue
The sun shines most every day, chlorophyll 
Chlorophyll does its work best in sun's warmth 

When the sky is cast over with dark clouds 
And the much needed rain comes down in sheets 
Then in darkness of the night roots soak up 
After which my valley is greener still 

So when troubles befall like the rain falls 
They make you grow strong like your valley green 
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 - Photo and Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2020, All Rights Reserved
 - I am linked with Sanaa Rizvi at Weekly Scribblings, Prose and Poetry United, https://poetsandstorytellersunited.blogspot.com/2020/01/weekly-scribblings-1-january-is-here.html?m=1

 - Sanaa has asked us to write using at least three of the following word group.
 - I used darkness, cast, warmth, and sky.

amaryllis                  somewhat                percussion                darkness                  grapefruit
deep                           cast                         warmth                       blood                          touch
gravel                        twilight                    lips                              sky                             sleep
bedside                      scones                     fervour                      harbinger                 cogitation

9 comments:

  1. You live in a beautiful valley and yes rain means green. I love 'So when troubles befall like the rain falls
    They make you grow strong like your valley green'

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  2. Oh, I so needed this hopeful piece. Thank you

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  3. Lovely images, and a nice piece of philosophy too.

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  4. Wise words, Jim:
    '...when troubles befall like the rain falls
    They make you grow strong like your valley green'.

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  5. Living in the English countryside in the 1940s to 1960s I still have that yearning for those places of my memory, which are often spoilt by a visit!

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  6. The message in your poem comes thru loud and clear! Love it.

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  7. We need them both--light and darkness--so we can grow as we ought.

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  8. Beautiful poem with wise meaning, Jim. Love this!

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