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Saturday, November 23, 2019

A List Poem

Ordeal 

She would groan
at the slightest touch
At the verge
of a mere esthesis 
she would plunge 
into hysterics

You would think 

she must be 
in the back seat 
of the car with 
her beau  
But no, it was 
only an 
onyx colored caterpillar 
with stick-like feet 
crossing her toe 

Her doctor dug deep 

into his satchel bag 
Voila!!
a vial of risperidone  
After her first dosage 
a shot in the arm 
she went wild 
   a feeling 
she had never known 

"Doctor  doctor", she cried 

in a loud Eagle-tone, *
"I  think we're gonna crash."  Which she promptly did 
taking the doctor along   

The next morning 

she was groaning still 
the warden was pulling 
her from the heap 
and the Doctor was 
still hanging on 

Bad medicine 

Bad Doctor 

* Note:  The woman's cry in the Eagle's classic rock song, "Life in the Fast Lane."  Those Lyrics herehttps://genius.com/Eagles-life-in-the-fast-lane-lyrics
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 - Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2019, All Rights Reserved 
 - I'm linked with Kerry O'Connor in the Imaginary Garden at http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2019/11/get-listed-with-mystery-guest.html?m=1 


 - At the link above Kerry has given us a list of thirteen words (onyx,  groan, lemon, sticks, elocution, shelves, cinnamon, Twix, risperidone, Nyx-door, warden, plunge, esthesis)
 with a request to use them in a poem.  I have used seven. 

8 comments:

  1. I like the image of the onyx caterpillar with stick-like toes.

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  2. This is so good. Now I am fascinated by the possibility of being so unhinged by even a light touch that one cannot cope with life around other people.

    Ooh, Halsey. Good jam. (Unrelated.)

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  3. Bad medicine
    Bad Doctor...……. but what a trip

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  4. Bad medicine indeed... was the caterpillar cause or result?

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  5. Ah, funny! And I do love that song - Life in the Fast Lane.

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  6. That was quite entertaining, however I think the prison doctor should be checked out!

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  7. Oh to think the mere touch of a Caterpillar would have her spiraling...Some doctors think they are beyond error. It appears she showed him he was capable of making one.

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