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Monday, December 07, 2015

Bright and Sunny Day ~~ a Whiligig Poem

 

Two Bites

 

One bright and sunny day

Soon to become darkened

Our clumsy wasp was caught

Red molecules of blood

Sticky whirl, his demise  

He did begrudge that day

Spider's web alluring

Poppy seeds sugar dripped 

His shouts of no avail

Until heard by the crow

False alarm, two small bites

Food chain, gizzard pulling 

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Photo and Poem Copyright © 2015 Jimmiehov. All Rights Reserved
- This poem is linked to Sunday's Whirligig: A Dozen Words for Writers (# 36) 
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I'm also linked with Marian at The Tuesday Platform

This week's Whirligig Word List (all twelve):

sunny, clumsy, wasp, molecules, whirl, begrudge, spider, poppy, shouts, crow, alarm, pulling, and I used all twelve, on in each line.

9 comments:

  1. clumsy clumsy wasp, caught in a vicious circle; serious issue, yet witty

    much love...

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  2. Wonderful tale. Such is the cycle of life.

    Great write and thanks for visiting.

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  3. And begrudge he should. Thanks for the visit,

    Elizabeth

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  4. The food chain always surprise the carnivores... and I guess it doesn't end here.

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  5. And that's the circle of life. Liked the point of view here. Good read.

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  6. it is like looking at a knitted scarf,
    your poem is beautiful and creative.

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