Before I Die: when I heard the ghosts -- Writing challenges

. . . Before I Die;

. . ... . when I heard the ghosts

 

Setting: (from a poem, Rain, as written by Claribel Alegría)

"... memories: the reedy voice of the servant telling me tales of ghosts ... Rain is falling and memories keep flooding by ... "^**1**

I wanted the voices brought, and memories of my life which come flooding by, to be written in this poem.

 

My Poem: 

. . . Before I Die;

. . ... . when I heard the ghosts

I heard those ghosts a lot from my old cronies now gone.

Those retired too late, who died before a year was up.

I'll not do that said I.

I will see the world

before I die. 

I traveled here and there, all over Europe nine times.

No countries I missed that I want to see.

Been to Australia and New Zealand,

Central America,

though the Panama canal,

most of Canada, 

China for a month, 

and all fifty

of the United States. 

I heard those ghosts, a lot from my dad, may he RIP.

He told me he had wanted to be a lawyer, the very best.

But then my Grandpa asked his help, later he was too old.

I'll do that for my dad I said,

I can do that

before I die. 

I went to school (had sat out eleven years), enjoyed every minute.

Years, eleven more, sitting in the back of the classroom with the bare-

footed hippies, their yellow dogs waiting at the foot of the stairs.

My loves I touched not,

they, doing their calculus in the back 

while pretending to listen as the

British literature teacher

rambling on.

Enjoyed it all and

had my degree,

before I died.  

I heard those ghosts, "they sat beside me, the ghosts
and the bed creaked, that purple-dark afternoon
when I learned you were leaving forever." ^**2**

Those ghosts told me of marriage, how to make it last

But too late now, she was leaving forever. 

I had heard their voice, those ghosts, she was gone forever.

So I lived my life with a new freedom,

bought a motorcycle,

was immersed in my school,

Sundays at the park, listening

to bands playing ^**3** under the trees,

or to poets on their stumps.

I did that,

I was alive. 

I heard those ghosts, memories of my mom,

she always said "you won't find a nice girl in a bar."

Told how she'd like for me to have a mate. 

So I went along my way, for sure I wasn't looking for a mate,

too busy with my job, play, and university work for that. 

But one day a young lady was waiting for me after school,

waiting with my friends at the table.

I often thought after that,

"how could I ask her out?"

Baseball was the answer,

she went, with me and my four.

Six months later we were wed.

Again, till death do. 

I hear those ghosts, often while driving in the rain

or laying in the bed, staying there until past eight.

I'm retired.  But life goes on, what the Hey? 

They tell me of the tidbits of life like when my beloved dog died,

a new grandchild is born, or another is wed.  How life does go on.

One, a little scary, asked if I was ready to met my Maker.

After some soul searching

I thought I was not,

was too busy for all that.

Surely there is time

before I die 

But that Voice I heard wouldn't give up, it was a Ghost's voice different

than any of those before.  I remember that day He said, "Behold,

I stand at the door and knock," Then He asked if I would let him in.

 

I said yes, that I was sorry for all before

and knew that He was the one,

the only one, 

who could save me

from all my sin.

Would He please? 

I am thankful for all those ghosts who filled me in

on all the things that I had forgotten.  All the things

my mother asked me to do, above all to heed the Lord.

 

Well, He said "Yes, Heaven waits for you,"

and now I will live

still after my death.

I'll obey Him as I can,

and trust Him

until I die.

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This poem is linked with Herotomost at the Real Toads, Friday Challenge (Link # 1)
and with Grace at the Real Toads, Sunday Mini-challenge (Link # 2)

Notes:

1)  Herotomost's challenge was to use a refrain technique (link) that he has used in several of his poems.  Although his (check them out at Link # 1 above) were an appendage of the prose nature, they can also be incorporated into the poem in either verse or prose. 

 -- My refrains pretty well cover the writer hearing the ghost or ghosts.  The message from the ghost(s) helps explain the setting of the situation in the verses that follow.
2)   [^**1**  and ^**2** ]Grace's challenge was to write a new poem based on one of Claribel Alegria's two poems, Sorrow or Rain. Or a part would do.  I chose the part of Rain, copied below, to use as a springboard and prompt for my poem.

--The excerpt from Rain (you can read all of the poems at Link # 2 above): 

^**1** ... memories:
the reedy voice
of the servant
telling me tales
of ghosts.

^**2** They sat beside me
the ghosts
and the bed creaked
that purple-dark afternoonwhen I learned you were leaving forever ...

3) ^**3**  The ZZ Top group (link) was one of the many fledgling singing bands out under all those trees in the Houston, Texas, parks. 
-- ZZ Top got their start in Houston in the late sixties, the time I was there with my motorcycle on Sunday afternoons.
4)  This poem is true to me, as I, the writer, relates to various time (lives) in my life.