Ya hear, eons past,
two nuns, a priest, a gopher,
died, went to Heaven
Met St. Peter at the gate
Eighty-plus, four April Fools
.
.
Haha, folks, that's all.
Got their Obama Care. Now
deadline came and went
Double inverse Venetian
sonnet--nonesuch, April Fools!.
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Today my double tanka is linked with Mama Zen at the Real Toads Word Count
Mom Zee's command:
- "Today, I would like you to write a double inverse Venetian sonnet using the traditional hexatonic goatameter. Your piece must include two nuns, a priest, a gopher, and a space / time paradox. Please address either universal health care or twerking in the volta . . . in 37 words or less.
- April Fools!"
- I did pretty well even with the joke. My 'Word Count:' 1 (title), 24 (verse one), 20 (second verse) (thats less than 37 per tanka so it was fudged a bit for a total of 45 words)
Haha! I'm glad someone took up the challenge. You did it in style, Jim.
ReplyDeleteI am rolling in the floor laughing, Jim!
ReplyDeleteLOL...really great :D
ReplyDeleteLove it!!
ReplyDeleteThis made me smile, Jim! Good one!
ReplyDeleteAnd a happy April Fool's to you!
ReplyDeleteYOU really shared a challenge within a challenge-very clever!
ReplyDeleteshow-off ! :)
ReplyDeleteWhat fun to read Jim ~ This is hilarious ~
ReplyDeleteWow! Very good, Dr Jim :)
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